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Haunted Woods

Haunted woods with massive trees Beckoned at once, naughty three Eleven, twelve and thirteen An awesome aged all-boys team Boy of thirteen was on the lead Asked the youngest to gain quick speed 'To Nail three shirts to biggest tree' Was the game of Halloween glee As three boys rushed past large shrub Wind whistled with fearsome drub Three boys ran like floating ghosts Their shirts got stuck in thorn posts All three were painted red here and there By thorns, thistles, stumbles of nice share Lost in haunted woods for quite a while Three boys returned home in classic style

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Suzette Richards

Date: 10/31/2024 3:04:00 AM

An enjoyable take on the contest brief, and the ending put a smile on my face. :) Congratulations on your win, Thriveni

thriveni c mysore
Date: 11/2/2024 8:55:00 PM

I am grateful to you for your kind visit dear poet. Thank you for these happy words. Blessings & cheers.

Terry Flood

Date: 10/30/2024 4:39:00 PM

An enjoyable write, Thriveni…. I’m tempted to say, “Kids, huh?” Congrats on your win. Terry

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/30/2024 8:29:00 PM

Thank you so much dear poet for this pleasant visit and kind words. Blessings & cheers.

David Crandall

Date: 10/28/2024 5:36:00 PM

Fun poem, Thriveni!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/29/2024 8:10:00 AM

your happy visit and words brings me joy dear poet. thank you. I am grateful. Blessings & cheers.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/28/2024 6:29:00 AM

Thriveni, your narrative poem is well-plotted and chilling. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/29/2024 8:09:00 AM

you find it chilling? ah, thank you dear poet friend. I am grateful for your visit and words. Blessings & cheers.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/28/2024 3:25:00 AM

I enjoyed the read thriveni, congratulations on your win in Tania’s contest… Beryl

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/29/2024 8:08:00 AM

Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. I am glad you liked it. I am grateful for your words. Blessings & cheers.

Valsa George

Date: 10/27/2024 10:04:00 PM

Hi Thriveni, back to your poem to congratulate you on your great win.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/29/2024 8:07:00 AM

So kind of you to return with these happy words dear poet friend, means so much to me. Thank you. am grateful for your time. Blessings & cheers.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/27/2024 9:40:00 PM

congrats on your win dear Thriveni

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/29/2024 8:06:00 AM

Thank you for these happy words and pleasant visit dear poet friend. thank you. blessings & cheers.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/27/2024 9:58:00 AM

Back to say congratulations on your winning placement dear poet!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/27/2024 8:19:00 PM

you bring me joy dear poet. thank you dear friend.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/27/2024 8:07:00 AM

Thriveni, a great Halloween poem, creative and well done, congratulations on your winning placement.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/27/2024 8:16:00 PM

I am so grateful for the contest and the placement dear poet. Thank you. Means so much to me.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/18/2024 8:27:00 AM

Very engaging write dear poet! I was on the edge of my seat and happy the boys returned home safe! Good luck in the contest! I also sent you soupmail hugs.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/18/2024 10:01:00 PM

we, as mothers can't harm children even in poetry dear poet. I am grateful for your cheerful words, glad you liked it dear friend. Cheers.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/16/2024 3:15:00 AM

I can only imagine what they looked like upon their return, very well written piece Thriveni, gl in the contest,

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/16/2024 6:17:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am grateful for your good wishes. Cheers.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/15/2024 1:26:00 PM

Dear Thrivini, This is a nice intro into the Halloween season. I very much enjoyed your journey with the boys. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/15/2024 8:01:00 PM

Your visit brings me so much joy dear poet,it is an honor to know you liked it. I am grateful for your blessings Sir. My respects & cheers.

Valsa George

Date: 10/15/2024 9:09:00 AM

This sounds scary and humorous at the same time. Boys of that age are so adventurous. Glad they came back home, though bruised but without being in danger.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/15/2024 8:00:00 PM

Dear poet friend, thank you for your visit and read! Yeah I made them go home safe haha. Thank you for your time. Blessings & cheers.

Lin Lane

Date: 10/15/2024 7:49:00 AM

People can be hurt and haunted by believing the wrong people. Food for thought.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 10/15/2024 7:58:00 PM

I am so grateful for your kind visit dear poet. There is so much wisdom in your say. Thank you for your time. Blessings & cheers.