Haunted Lighthouse

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~ Haunted Lighthouse~ (free verse) Perched above water Full of ghost stories Lighthouse is so old Lightkeeper still here Love doing his rounds This is still his home Never wants to leave it Lighthouse is so old Some folks see his ghost Sometimes he appears They listen at night Footstep sounds upstairs Lighthouse is so old He still cares for lighthouse It's always his home. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 October.13.2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2017 8:30:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem, Dorian, I enjoyed reading..~*

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/31/2017 6:46:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Eve, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my "Haunted Lighthouse" poem:) Most kind of you!:) I' m so happy to know you enjoyed this creepy one:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2015 4:12:00 PM

I found the imagery creepy Dorian and liked the impact of the repeated line:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/31/2017 6:44:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Jan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my "Haunted Lighthouse" poem:) Most kind of you!:) I do apologize from my heart for not answering you before, somehow I missed this one back then.I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D