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Haunted House No More

Reverberating eerie noise Interspersed with tormenting voice Always lamenting like that of sorrowful boys--- Oh, haunted house… you allow children not to rejoice! Echoing agonizing wails Constantly lingers midst cries of whales Terrorizing passers-by who are on the trails--- Oh, haunted house… your mournful song prevails! Beckoning conservationists to behold Antique treasure to be preserved from cold Calling now for the next generations to uphold--- Oh, haunted house… may your mystery as a legacy unfold! Standing as an edifice of horror and fear Doomed with gloom against glow of wisdom cheer Surpassing museum with its precious price, verily dear--- Oh, haunted house… I pray that you miraculously steer our tear! Transformed for vibrant worship Toward Praising God* along jubilant fellowship Anchored upon supplication midst triumphant leadership--- Oh, haunted house no more... rebuilt by blest radiant discipleship!
*Psalm 150:6 - Let every thing that hath breath praise the LORD. Praise ye the LORD. October 19, 2024 3rd place, "Haunted House, Haunted Cemetery or Haunted Woods 16 Lines of Rhyme" Poetry Contest; Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 10/27/2024

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Date: 10/27/2024 9:11:00 PM
amazing. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 10/27/2024 8:20:00 AM
Beata, wonderfully creative, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 10/21/2024 5:54:00 AM
A unique take! I love it!
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