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Haunted Home

Built for a priest in the twenties moved up from the ground my house traveled across the road and was bound with a cold basement as cool as the breeze. A deacon or priest, may reside in my home their spirit must roam apart from the newly deceased. Maybe it's real maybe it's not maybe a ghost resides on this lot the basement gives off an eerie feel. There's only one way to know but I'm a bit scared but no ghost has ever dared to go where the cool breeze doesn't blow. 2nd place in the "haunted" contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Date: 9/28/2019 11:34:00 PM
A ghost hunters dream house! Congrats on your win this fun poem.
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Date: 9/28/2019 1:47:00 PM
Astrid great poem and congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Date: 9/28/2019 12:00:00 PM
Astrid, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky write, well done!
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Date: 9/27/2019 7:13:00 AM
"Maybe it's real maybe it's not maybe a ghost resides on this lot the basement gives off an eerie feel." - this part is so great Astrid. I liked this poem immensely.
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Date: 9/26/2019 12:04:00 PM
Hello Astrid Boneck, so nice to meet you. Yes that is spooky. In a house I use to live in with my husband, was haunted as well. I would hear a voice calling my name from the basement. I would go down to see if anyone was there So I do understand spooky. , and no one was there. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/27/2019 10:43:00 AM
That's scary! I asked my parents why the basement is so cold even in summer, they don't know. Our landlord doesn't know either.

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