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Haunt

Your heart on mine, beating in time. I guess this is what they call true love. Though lovers be lost, our love shall not, we are nothing. Tonight we'll pledge the end for I am eternal death. Every moment with you is a breath, I can no longer exhale. Wait out the evening in search of you, you bleed me dry. For a chance of closure and compassion as lonely and dead as the evening sun. Just another person in search for purpose and salvation. Remember me, as the cold air that hits your lungs. I guess this is what they call true love.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2014 8:47:00 PM

Lovely ending lines, Christopher, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Christopher Heinrich

Date: 4/13/2014 8:43:00 PM

Thank you so much for the kind words you guys. I hope to share more in the future. I am very excited and humbled to be welcomed to the Poetry Soup family :) Regards, Chris

Skat A

Date: 4/13/2014 8:10:00 PM

Christopher, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2014 12:01:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Christopher :) - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)