Haughty Display Drove Humpty Dumpty To His Fall

Humpty Dumpty starred in a nursery rhyme… His fall accordingly was the talk at that time Soon it was labeled as a mysterious crime Needing solution through wisdom’s prime! Here am I submitting my document Compliant to prudent investigative requirement. The facts are now ready for scrutiny’s engagement Detailing Humpty Dumpty’s story-development. “Humpty, my dear son,” called Mr. Dumpty “You’re blessed, never had experienced being empty; Use gracious treasure well, share it; spend it not in vanity Enjoy life; trust God as the supreme Authority.” That was the senior Dumpty’s fatherly admonition When Humpty would pursue his college education. As a young lad raring to experience bliss’ satisfaction He plunged into the pleasures of world exploration. Here and there, he flaunted his father’s wealth-anchored business Declared himself a billionaire’s heir of fortune-highness. Thus, he lived as a one-day millionaire, lured in wantonness “Sky is the limit…” he asserted, oblivious of wastage-darkness. With his decision to follow the prodigal son’s route He, with displayed self-conceit, would sat on the wall of arrogance-bout That paved the way to his great downfall and knock-out Making him the vanquished braggadocio champion without a doubt. Then his father learned of his son’s misery He prayed for Humpty’s rescue from pride’s territory Believing, with faith in the Lord, for victory Ensuring his son’s deliverance against haughtiness’ fatal injury. The Almighty God’s power worked triumphantly Humpty Dumpty, from brokenness, repented humbly Midst love and grace, he sought for forgiveness sincerely Miraculously, he received peace while grieving terribly. Restored, he returned to his father who was waiting for his arrival They had a glorious reunion along a grand festival Proclaiming “Case Solved!” for Humpty Dumpty’s survival… In their family, that was a great revival! The nursery rhyme can now be “Humpty Dumpty walked in the light*… Humpty Dumpty ascended toward faith’s height Through the Sovereign King’s might Humpty Dumpty did what was right!”
*Isaiah 2:5 ...Let us walk in the light of the LORD. July 3, 2018 2nd place, "Nursery Rhyme Wackiness" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Tom Woody; judged on 7/20/2024. 2nd Place, "The Mystery of Humpty Dumpty" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Faraz Ajmal; judged on 7/7/2018.

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Date: 7/21/2024 7:58:00 AM
How great to think of this old rhyme in such a way... using the prodigal son story was genius and a cautionary tale. Also one of God's Forgiveness and love which can never be told enough. Congratulations! Xoxo
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Date: 7/20/2024 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations dear Beata.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/21/2024 4:25:00 AM
Thanks. God bless you.
Date: 7/20/2024 1:39:00 PM
Congrats, Beata.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/21/2024 4:24:00 AM
Thanks. God bless you.
Date: 7/20/2024 1:02:00 PM
Beata! I thought for sure this was Gina's so this is a nice surprise. The way you tied in the Humpty dumpty story in with the Biblical prodigal son is nothing short of brilliant. Congrats on placement
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/21/2024 4:24:00 AM
Thanks so much for the placement. God bless you.
Date: 7/8/2018 10:16:00 PM
A lovely write in the changing story of Humpty Dumpty, Beata. Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 7:21:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks so much.
Date: 7/7/2018 11:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Extremele creative and well-written story with a message. I like how you did this.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 7:22:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks so much.
Date: 7/7/2018 10:40:00 AM
Hi Beata, You tale reminds of the story of prodigal son. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 7:22:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks so much.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:34:00 AM
Every cloud has a silver lining, and we have seen that how in the end Humpty realized his mistake and came back to God, many congratulations on your 2nd position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 7:21:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks for the opportunity to be a part of your sponsored contest. God bless you.
Date: 7/4/2018 12:40:00 AM
Beata.. Back from a party and wide awake. Need me a few funny, mysterious, interesting, or mellow writes to settle me into a restful state. So glad I came across your poem tonight.. just what I needed!
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Date: 7/4/2018 1:11:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks for your comment. God bless you.
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