Hatred

flesh or bones or wood inch by inch moves this termite ~ eating up empires 10 January 2022 A STRAND (1050) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/14/2022 2:36:00 AM

So relevant today. Fantastic metaphor. Congrats.

Date: 1/13/2022 1:29:00 PM

Wow…powerful and poignant! Congratulations on your win! :)Paulette

Date: 1/13/2022 11:06:00 AM

Amazing Chris - hatred as a termite destroying from within! Wonderful image. Congratulations on your win!

Date: 1/13/2022 7:12:00 AM

So well expressed, hatred's spread, a blight. Congratulations Christuraj! Be well. Brian

Date: 1/10/2022 8:43:00 PM

Clever Haiku, Christuraj. So true, and beautifully penned Take care. Shirley

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/10/2022 10:27:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Date: 1/10/2022 5:18:00 PM

Termites and hatred, same results, they have a way of eating away at something. Good Haiku, Christuraj. Have a great day! Bill

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/10/2022 7:54:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Date: 1/10/2022 9:39:00 AM

The nature of hatred is vividly portrayed here, Christuraj. A fine haiku!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/10/2022 7:54:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Date: 1/10/2022 9:22:00 AM

Good description in this haiku, Christuraj! I can easily picture this. Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/10/2022 7:55:00 PM

Thank you very much. I was, really missing your encouragements.

Date: 1/10/2022 9:20:00 AM

Great one. This is true. I hope you have a nice day :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/10/2022 7:55:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Date: 1/10/2022 7:45:00 AM

This is a creative metaphor, Chris. Hatred erodes on a large scale. ~ Best regards // paul

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/10/2022 7:46:00 AM

Thank you very much.