Hated Job

My worst job that of washing DeLaval,
Machine for separating milk from cream.
Yes, I remember that so very well.
That nasty job was truly a bad dream.

We had no running water on the farm
And had to heat it on the old wood range.
Water cooled off fast, couldn't keep it warm
And needed kettle boiling for exchange.

Wash water soon turned into milky slime,
The water from our well was very hard.
With no sewer to accept it at the time, 
I had to pour wash water on the yard.

My daddy was so proud of his machine,
But I was she who had to keep it clean.

For Sara's contest: "Job"

11/14/14
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Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 8:36 PM
my friends husband is a dairy farmer - i can relate to this write many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Great poem, Joyce! My husband's mom was raised on a farm with cows, and I believe she used to talk about this procedure! Nicely written! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Kayode Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 11:23 AM
You were the one doing the real Job,all that is history today; thank God you live to tell the story; congrats on the win Joyce...huggs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Sounds very interesting Joyce. I used to have to clean the big milk container when the truck sucked the milk out. The worst time was in the winter. Congratulations on your win, I really enjoyed reading this.
Gorelick Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:24 PM
OH , I love this.. I can remember my mom washing ours..Congrats on a terrific poem BG
Lawless Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 6:36 PM
another aspect of farm living I never knew about....Congrats Joyce...on your win and on cleaning the machine....many times.
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Some machines were an advancement for the men but made work for the women..I know that you look back and wonder how you managed to do it and do it well..Thanks for the entry in my contest and for sharing some of your life with us..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Congrats on the win with this lovely sonnet
Roper Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 11:08 PM
Joyce, sounds like a depressing job for a child. Good luck on the contest :) eve
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