Hatchling

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Little I, free as Birth, sands 'neath my being, as I, Yearn an ocean's girth.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/19/2019 10:14:00 AM

Hello William, I love this poem. As i read I can picture the struggling to go to the ocean. Aloha! Darlene

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/19/2019 11:08:00 AM

Most kind of you to say Darlene, Aloha wk

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/17/2019 7:26:00 PM

Wow! I love it that I could HEAR this poem being spoken. I have no idea how you did that, but it is adorable, and makes the poem come to life for me! Wow!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/17/2019 7:58:00 PM

'Tis crazy tech world, if not for the kids, methinks I'd be lost Caren, Aloha wk