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Harvest Moon

The harvest moon rises so bright
Through the deep darkness it does shine
Like an orange ball in the night
Evolving with wishes of mine

Through the deep darkness it does shine
Chasing away any worry
Evolving with wishes of mine
With fall dreams before snow flurry

Chasing away any worry
The golden globe does lead the way
With fall dreams before snow flurry
Friendship strengthens into the day

The golden globe does lead the way
Life is shining just like the moon
Friendship strengthens into the day
It leads the way to colors soon

Life is shining just like the moon
Like an orange ball in the night
It leads the way to colors soon
The harvest moon rises so bright

Heidi Sands

10/6/17

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Quoth Theraven Date: 9/30/2020 9:03:00 PM Heidi, This is the way everyone should see the moon. At least they can get a glimpse through your Pantoum. -Richard Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/1/2020 5:54:00 AM Hi Richard. How are you? I saw a beautiful moon the other night and took some photos. Thank you for your visit to this. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well :)

Harshita Chaudhary Date: 10/29/2017 1:21:00 AM Yes my friend, precious life always shines like moon. A very beautiful poem :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/29/2017 8:27:00 AM Thank you Harshita :)

Michael Bell Date: 10/8/2017 2:04:00 PM Love the imagery Heidi, Well done! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/8/2017 2:30:00 PM Thank you Michael :)

Joseph May Date: 10/8/2017 10:17:00 AM I like the new version you did Heidi...best wishes Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/8/2017 10:21:00 AM Thank you very much Joseph :)

Russell Sivey Date: 10/7/2017 6:46:00 AM Beautifully expressed, as the moon is my muse this poem excited me and brought a smile to my face! I got into this piece and felt every nuance, a true "orange ball in the night!" I am in awe of its brilliance this morning my friend! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/7/2017 9:29:00 AM Hi Russell. I am so happy you enjoyed this one! Thank you so much for your kind comment. Have a nice day! :)

Susan Ashley Date: 10/6/2017 9:31:00 PM a beautiful pantoum Heidi with fantastic imagery. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/7/2017 9:29:00 AM Thank you so much Susan for your kind comment :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/6/2017 7:17:00 PM An apt description of harvest moon--a pleasant sight, well depicted in your poem--best for a win, Heidi! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/6/2017 9:15:00 PM Thank you Vijay :)

Tim Smith Date: 10/6/2017 7:15:00 PM It is beautiful Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/6/2017 9:14:00 PM Thank you Tim :)

Sunlite Wanter Date: 10/6/2017 6:28:00 PM Very pretty. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/6/2017 6:31:00 PM Thank you Sunlite :)

Joseph May Date: 10/6/2017 6:26:00 PM A lovely Pantoum Heidi...GL in the contest Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 10/6/2017 6:31:00 PM Thank you , Joseph :)