Heidi Sands Poet Pantoum

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Harvest Moon

The harvest moon rises so bright
Through the deep darkness it does shine
Like an orange ball in the night
Evolving with wishes of mine

Through the deep darkness it does shine
Chasing away any worry
Evolving with wishes of mine
With fall dreams before snow flurry

Chasing away any worry
The golden globe does lead the way
With fall dreams before snow flurry
Friendship strengthens into the day

The golden globe does lead the way
Life is shining just like the moon
Friendship strengthens into the day
It leads the way to colors soon

Life is shining just like the moon
Like an orange ball in the night
It leads the way to colors soon
The harvest moon rises so bright

Heidi Sands

10/6/17

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Quoth Theraven September 30, 2020 at 9:03 PM Heidi, This is the way everyone should see the moon. At least they can get a glimpse through your Pantoum. -Richard Heidi Sands October 1, 2020 at 5:54 AM Hi Richard. How are you? I saw a beautiful moon the other night and took some photos. Thank you for your visit to this. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well :)

Harshita Chaudhary October 29, 2017 at 1:21 AM Yes my friend, precious life always shines like moon. A very beautiful poem :) Heidi Sands October 29, 2017 at 8:27 AM Thank you Harshita :)

Michael Bell October 8, 2017 at 2:04 PM Love the imagery Heidi, Well done! Heidi Sands October 8, 2017 at 2:30 PM Thank you Michael :)

Joseph May October 8, 2017 at 10:17 AM I like the new version you did Heidi...best wishes Heidi Sands October 8, 2017 at 10:21 AM Thank you very much Joseph :)

Russell Sivey October 7, 2017 at 6:46 AM Beautifully expressed, as the moon is my muse this poem excited me and brought a smile to my face! I got into this piece and felt every nuance, a true "orange ball in the night!" I am in awe of its brilliance this morning my friend! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!! Heidi Sands October 7, 2017 at 9:29 AM Hi Russell. I am so happy you enjoyed this one! Thank you so much for your kind comment. Have a nice day! :)

Susan Ashley October 6, 2017 at 9:31 PM a beautiful pantoum Heidi with fantastic imagery. Good luck in the contest! Heidi Sands October 7, 2017 at 9:29 AM Thank you so much Susan for your kind comment :)

Vijay Pandit October 6, 2017 at 7:17 PM An apt description of harvest moon--a pleasant sight, well depicted in your poem--best for a win, Heidi! Heidi Sands October 6, 2017 at 9:15 PM Thank you Vijay :)

Tim Smith October 6, 2017 at 7:15 PM It is beautiful Heidi Sands October 6, 2017 at 9:14 PM Thank you Tim :)

Sunlite Wanter October 6, 2017 at 6:28 PM Very pretty. Heidi Sands October 6, 2017 at 6:31 PM Thank you Sunlite :)

Joseph May October 6, 2017 at 6:26 PM A lovely Pantoum Heidi...GL in the contest Heidi Sands October 6, 2017 at 6:31 PM Thank you , Joseph :)