Harvest Moon

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The harvest moon rises so bright Through the deep darkness it does shine Like an orange ball in the night Evolving with wishes of mine Through the deep darkness it does shine Chasing away any worry Evolving with wishes of mine With fall dreams before snow flurry Chasing away any worry The golden globe does lead the way With fall dreams before snow flurry Friendship strengthens into the day The golden globe does lead the way Life is shining just like the moon Friendship strengthens into the day It leads the way to colors soon Life is shining just like the moon Like an orange ball in the night It leads the way to colors soon The harvest moon rises so bright Heidi Sands 10/6/17

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/30/2020 9:03:00 PM

Heidi, This is the way everyone should see the moon. At least they can get a glimpse through your Pantoum. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2020 5:54:00 AM

Hi Richard. How are you? I saw a beautiful moon the other night and took some photos. Thank you for your visit to this. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well :)

Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 10/29/2017 1:21:00 AM

Yes my friend, precious life always shines like moon. A very beautiful poem :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2017 8:27:00 AM

Thank you Harshita :)

Michael Bell

Date: 10/8/2017 2:04:00 PM

Love the imagery Heidi, Well done!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2017 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Michael :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/8/2017 10:17:00 AM

I like the new version you did Heidi...best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2017 10:21:00 AM

Thank you very much Joseph :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2017 6:46:00 AM

Beautifully expressed, as the moon is my muse this poem excited me and brought a smile to my face! I got into this piece and felt every nuance, a true "orange ball in the night!" I am in awe of its brilliance this morning my friend! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/7/2017 9:29:00 AM

Hi Russell. I am so happy you enjoyed this one! Thank you so much for your kind comment. Have a nice day! :)