Harvest

much shorter days now
the temperature falls at night
harvest moon provides 

Written for Brian's contest

natureon work and workinghaiku

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2009 3:53:00 AM

Congratulations, Michael, on your Honorable Mention in Brian’s Images of Fall contest with this wonderful haiku. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2009 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations to our hard working college student!! Well done !!! :) love, Carrie

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 8/30/2009 6:44:00 AM

Such a simple picture and so lovely, bursting with imagery. Great haiku: Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín

Date: 8/28/2009 6:02:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the contest winners to my other comment. Keep on writing. Karen

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/28/2009 1:23:00 PM

In love with the last line of this haiku! Brilliant! Congratulations on your placement in this contest.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/28/2009 6:40:00 AM

Lovely win Michael..your the best.! BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/28/2009 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in Brian's Images of Fall Contest Michael. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 8/28/2009 1:24:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Michael.Rgds Brian .My latest contest Hymn of Harvest is now opened

Farah Chamma

Date: 8/27/2009 8:44:00 AM

A really good Haiku Micheal...Thanks for sharing... Always, Farah

Laurie Ginn

Date: 8/22/2009 8:20:00 AM

Good Mornin' Mr. Jordan, I so love a harvest moon it always makes the night more special

Katherine Stella

Date: 8/22/2009 5:55:00 AM

oh such a beautiful write and used of imagery my friend hope all is well jennys birthday is on the 25 of aug so shes been nagging me lol she wont get any gifts from me until afterwards but will try my best to make sure she gets what she wants and thats a limo ride to school told her my music better soar soon for me getting broke lol thanks for sharing mike give family my love you rock my friend this sure looks like a winner to me

Brian Strand

Date: 8/22/2009 12:41:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Michael.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2009 3:54:00 PM

Best wishes to you in the contest Michael. You have an excellent Haiku here. Love YF4L, Carol