Beata Agustin Poet Jueju

Harsh Storm

Harsh storm / great floods blow
Crashed hill / drenched fields flow
Blocked light / dark town prays
Faith cheered / peace* brings glow

*John 16:33 These things I (Jesus Christ) have spoken unto you, that in me ye might have peace. In the world ye shall have tribulation: but be of good cheer; I have overcome the world. 

June 1, 2023 
1st place, "Let us Rock Five - wujue" Jueju Poetry Writing Premier Contest
Sponsored by Suzette Richards; judged on 6/6/2023.

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Len Gasun June 8, 2023 at 12:54 AM I've read this ahead of time and I was so impressed and became my fave, although didn't find time to leave a comment. Now, I'm coming back to congratulate you on your win and placing it in my fave list! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win my dear poet friend and this lovely jueju! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Constance La France June 7, 2023 at 4:38 AM Beata, congratulations on your win in the contest, beautiful !

Suzette Richards June 6, 2023 at 11:54 PM Good morning, Beata. Please check the soup+mail I have sent you. Regards , Suzette Suzette Richards June 7, 2023 at 9:23 AM :)

Roger Roger June 6, 2023 at 2:39 AM Congratulations Kabayan... This is beautiful and very meaningful... Especially nowadays...

Regina Mcintosh June 6, 2023 at 2:24 AM beautiful. love it. God bless you and congratulations. Love, Gina

Suzette Richards June 6, 2023 at 1:55 AM Congratulations on your first-place win in my contest, Beata. I've sent soupmail. Kind regards, Suzette

Janice Canerdy June 2, 2023 at 7:09 AM Excellent poem--written for a prompt with VERY specific instructions, Beata! Janice