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Harsh Missions

Harsh Mission / San Francisco, CA 2011 Through the harsh white sunlight the random bits of cast offs tumble and stick smeared to the pavement and layered upon upright posts, from pillar to post they roll on bikes and trikes, on roller blades and skate boards, down and out, drunk and oh so sober, they meander as if on the streets of Paris in their mock Bistros with their fake hair, their primal piercings, and their do me do's just screaming of abuse... The childlike sibyls and torrid sirens howl at the fog banked moon as they stumble on the dole from room to rented room, or huddle in the bus shelters waiting to sneak a cheap ride down town. Bizzaro meets his mate in the masked denizens of the mission district breasts starred, caped and on display for all to see face hidden behind plastic lunacy... The giggling effervescence of misspent youth crumbles into a heedless epicurean mosh pit of aimless wandering joyous neglect... It is truly hard to know where the garbage ends and the art begins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/6/2011 3:01:00 PM
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Date: 7/6/2011 2:43:00 PM
You really brought this scene to the reader Debbie, a hazy and gritty feel for reality (you did good.!)
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Date: 7/6/2011 10:46:00 AM
Yep! You gotta smoke a little hash to get it on. No thanks. I'll play it real cool in my retirement. By the way - congrats on your feature this week. Love, daver
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:56:00 AM
What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:07:00 AM
Sounds like downtown Austin any day very nice read. well done
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Date: 7/5/2011 9:57:00 AM
perhaps inspired by a recent scene of SF nite lights, and the artsy parts of that city-life?? I do agree...hard to realize where that fine line begins and ends! Hope you have recovered from your trip with good memories! :) We are also just home, after a much more peaceful scene LOL ! And I still need to recoup! (a sign of old age???)
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