Harried

Seth Brown had a popular magic act everybody in town knew that fact. But his rabbit got sick with a display of I C K. Seth fired the rabbit and got a new hat.

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Joe Dimino

Date: 6/7/2016 6:42:00 AM

And the audience said, "Amen" to that. Love it!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/7/2016 10:55:00 PM

I value and appreciate your kind comment, Joe. Thank you for posting it.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/4/2016 1:38:00 PM

Let's hope he was aware before he put the hat on. ICK describes it. Love, Daver

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/7/2016 11:03:00 PM

Good point, Daver. In any event, he had more than a bad HARE day. Thank you for stopping by to comment. And thank you for closing with "love"; I appreciate that.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2016 12:25:00 PM

ewww lol a poorly bunny indeed:-( hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/1/2016 11:43:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. As we both know, judging the merits of one's work can be a treacherous enterprise. Of all the limericks I've written, this is one of my favorites. I mention that to encourage poets whose posts draw few/no comments. I want them to refuse to give up on themselves. hugs x x x