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Harmony In Marriage (Abc Poem)

Anxious brides carry doubt, Each female, Greets him intoxicated, Joining kingdoms love, Men now obedient, Pre qualify responses, Staying tomorrow united, Victorious women, Xerox yearlong zeal. I am sure this will strike up some controversy,,for sure...Maybe and then again maybe not !!! ABC poem for contest.

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Audrey Haick

Date: 2/24/2010 12:44:00 PM

Oh, you're good at this poetry form Cecil. I am still challenged. Great job. Peace, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2010 3:51:00 AM

Good ABC order...You make your first grade teacher proud....The m line ....sometimes and sometimes not....Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

David Byrne

Date: 2/23/2010 7:07:00 PM

I have trouble understanding this one.........smile!

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/23/2010 5:35:00 PM

no I did not try to disrespect men or women,,the line "Xerox yearlong zeal"meaning if both share and do not bump heads together,,there will be yearlong happinessfirst line is usually women have doubt,but the feel love or they would not be getting married,,men and women have shared obedience to each other,,,,,staying together takes work on both,,,and if they both are happy then happiness reigns forever,,,,Blessings..Cecil

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/23/2010 5:10:00 PM

xerox huh, well I guess i am a dunce, I don't see too much controversy. Are you disrespecting women? :)