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15.03.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Write Six Beautiful Lines

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France
1st place in the contest

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- Harmony In Diversity -

                      ~ The creation is as white marble for our soul -
                           holy and without blemish ~ quote by poet

                               Her lips hum an aged love song
                                   a virgin glowing intensely
                              Golden arches of lily of the valley
                               drinking from the river of silver
                   Whose strings are touched by the heart's secret
                            - what divinity with a visionary magic
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Agustin Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 2:30 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
Evans Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise! Quite a beauty.
Miller Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your win with this enchanting gem
mysore Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 6:42 AM
Oh! congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
George Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 3:26 AM
Back to your lovely poem with Congratulations on your first place win, dear Anne. Love and hugs!
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 3:28 PM
I nearly missed this, beautiful imagery Anne Lise and congrats on your placement. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 3:24 PM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/sweet write and quote. Great lily of the valley flower picture. Hugs... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................
Kitchin Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 1:55 PM
Anne-Lise, a beautiful and enchanting poem. best of luck in the contest. -hugs
Narain Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 10:34 AM
beautiflu poem and the picture.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 10:14 AM
This poem is pure magic. Mine is horrible. I'm considering deleting it. Hugs.
George Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Lilies of the valley are so enchanting. Indeed a divine sigh! Beautifully composed six lines with a stunning image. All the best dear Anne. Love and hugs
DiMino Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:14 AM
Beautiful poetry! Outrageously good! A FAV!
Maverick Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 12:13 AM
Yes variety is throughout the heavens Anne-Lise And yet.?? I am weighing the ecamples.?? In One I often consider, we have different elements That work to create day night rain and dry.' And Yet in becoming spirits we leave different race Traits behind..Yet here has worked in nation states since forever? Then there are angels who Will not assimilate.' Although they did before Wow theres a lot to condider? I am going to 'Branch out here" by stating a tree iis a tree..' And I am me.' Lol)))) Hm??
Maverick Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 12:14 AM
Enjoyed the thoughts here You engender? Is that the right term?? All the best in The contest.!
Singh Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:53 PM
Purity of love and divinity and essence of creation is pure and untainted. Very nice
Beaufort Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 6:51 PM
Anne-Lise, as you do so well, another beautiful sample of nature's gifts to us who appreciate them. Really a pleasure to read and contemplate.
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 4:18 PM
Beautiful imagery that touched me in all my creative places. I know Constance will adore this, too. CayCay
Allison Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:54 AM
gorgeous imagery and the picture is perfect with the poem! hugs jan xx
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