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H or R Pleiades contest sponsored by Joseph May

August 5, 2023

Harmony

Heralds togetherness
Hallmark of concordance
Humble coexistence 
Honeybees and flowers
Healthy symbiosis 
Honoring congruence
Heartfelt tranquility

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Paula Goldsmith

September 8, 2023 at 8:13 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Harmony" is in "Harmony." I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a fun day writing away..............

Lin Lane

September 8, 2023 at 8:16 AM

Thanks so much, Paula.

Janice Canerdy

September 8, 2023 at 5:23 AM

GREAT entry, Kim! A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice

Lin Lane

September 8, 2023 at 8:16 AM

I think wasn't meant for me, Janice. ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 8, 2023 at 1:42 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane

September 8, 2023 at 8:16 AM

Thanks, sweet friend. hugs

Stephan McBride

September 7, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Love this, the honeybees are considered one single organism the way they work together, wonderful poem of harmony

Lin Lane

September 8, 2023 at 8:15 AM

I appreciate your thoughtful comments, Stephan.

Kim Merryman

September 7, 2023 at 5:20 PM

Beautiful descriptions of harmony, Lin! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Lin Lane

September 8, 2023 at 8:15 AM

Thanks very much, Kim.

Joseph May

September 7, 2023 at 3:36 PM

Wonderful write Lin, Congrats on your win

Lin Lane

September 8, 2023 at 8:14 AM

Thank you for the honor, Joseph. I appreciate it.

Robert Lindley

September 6, 2023 at 6:16 AM

Such harmony in verse my good friend. ""Her verses sing right on out. Greet the world with a shout. Poesy simply divine. Such poetry is thine. Clear beauty on display. Reading such made my day."" God luck if for a contest, it is a finely cast winner. God bless you.

Lin Lane

September 8, 2023 at 8:15 AM

Your prediction was correct. Thanks, Robert.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 6, 2023 at 1:09 AM

- A wonderful harmony, Lin :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Lin Lane

September 8, 2023 at 8:14 AM

thanks, Anne-Lise.

Bill Baker

September 5, 2023 at 2:21 PM

Loved your Pleiades, Lin, good choice for the title. All thoughts fit the topic well. If for the contest, good luck! Bill

Lin Lane

September 7, 2023 at 5:28 PM

Thanks, Bill. Recovering from Covid

David Kavanagh

September 5, 2023 at 2:04 PM

You project a very balanced and well thought out view of harmony here Lin, beautifully worded, (healthy symbiosis) for me the stand out line of many, cheers David

Lin Lane

September 7, 2023 at 5:28 PM

Thanks, David.