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what concord we see in the earth and the ocean, sleeping in embrace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Date: 2/26/2022 2:24:00 PM
The interconnectedness of 2 of the major elements that sustain all life on this planet. Valsa, this is another BEAUTY, expressed from a harmonious mind!...ab
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Date: 2/26/2022 5:11:00 AM
You are so right Valsa, why do we walk along the seas edge, whilst the waves lap over our feet on the wet sand, it brings such harmony, beautiful Haiku. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 2/25/2022 12:27:00 PM
What a sublime picture you have painted with this haiku, Valsa. As deep as the ocean and profound as the Wisdom of the Earth's ages. FAVE-time for me. Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 2/25/2022 10:29:00 AM
Interesting concept; they both rub each other the right way? Aloha!
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Date: 2/25/2022 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful Poet Valsa! - Marshall
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