Harmony

what concord we see in the earth and the ocean, sleeping in embrace

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Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/26/2022 2:24:00 PM

The interconnectedness of 2 of the major elements that sustain all life on this planet. Valsa, this is another BEAUTY, expressed from a harmonious mind!...ab

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/26/2022 5:11:00 AM

You are so right Valsa, why do we walk along the seas edge, whilst the waves lap over our feet on the wet sand, it brings such harmony, beautiful Haiku. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/25/2022 12:27:00 PM

What a sublime picture you have painted with this haiku, Valsa. As deep as the ocean and profound as the Wisdom of the Earth's ages. FAVE-time for me. Thank you, Gershon

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/25/2022 10:29:00 AM

Interesting concept; they both rub each other the right way? Aloha!

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 2/25/2022 9:47:00 AM

Beautiful Poet Valsa! - Marshall