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Harmony

tangerine horizon, tantalizing senses,
                                      trilling homecoming birds...
                                   tweeting mates in warm nests,
                                    transcends trifles of daily life
                                         to great magnificence.




                          For "H" Contest - Old or New Poetry Contest
                                   Sponsor: Constance La France
                                                   FIRST PLACE

                                 "Alliteration" Poetry Contest
                                      Sponsor: Joseph May
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Alex Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Verses start with the letter T and give ample meaning. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 9:19 AM
The warmth of your words envelops us in "magnificence" Mala. Love the colors and shades of meaning. Congrats and high fives dear friend. Hugs and much love!
Peck Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Your poem is so lovely, Mala! Congrats on your placement!
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 8:34 AM
A great image and the photo further enhances the poem!! Congrats on your win!
Gauthier Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Now that I see the photo, I can appreciate how it elevates your poem ~ absolutely beautiful together
Calasibetta Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful alliteration.... Congratulations on your win! Blessings, Paulette
Schiavina Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Well captured beauty and peace of nature with transcendence to the Divine. Sincere congratulations on your well deserved win.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a colorful/beautiful~~story/write and picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Trifiatis Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Outstanding Alliteration, dearest Malabika. Kudos!
Dubey Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations on your win Malabika.Wonderful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:03 AM
A lovely alliterative write! Colorful, alliterative and peace-giving! Congratulations, Mala!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Kim. So glad you liked the alliterative poem. Love ~ Mala
Jayasankar Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 4:33 AM
Awesome my friend... Loved the beautiful picture as well as the magical verse written with alliterative beauty... soothing the tired mind with peace ... Congrats on your win dear Mala... Hugs... ~ Ani
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Ani. Your poem is magical too. Love ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 1:29 AM
Short and sweet! Indeed, a beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. Glad you liked it.
La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 9:30 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your beautiful poem ~ love and serenity _Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Thanks, Constance. I am honoured.
Brul Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 4:39 PM
Congratulations dear poet Malabika...This is an enchanting creation...
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Thanks, JCB. Glad you enjoyed.
Evans Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Congratulations. Such a lovely poem. Great imagery.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Thanks, Marilene. Really appreciate your uplifting comments.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Lovely. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Thanks, Gina. Glad you enjoyed.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Hello Mala, your poem has a lot of harmony. Love & Friendship Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Your welcome Mala. Love & Friendship Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 3:27 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Appreciate your inspiring comment.
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