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'harmonious Beats'

your hand fits perfectly in mine
a harmonious beating of hearts

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 9:25:00 PM

THis is really nice, Wilma. Sorry I have been so busy lately!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 11:33:00 AM

I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Wilma. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2011 8:52:00 AM

Good afternoon Wilma,.. charming and sweet.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 5:39:00 AM

many of your past and recent writes have inspired that write "Yesterday's Candle".... so thank you for the inspiration...love Michael

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 5:16:00 AM

A nice feeling that is my dear... with love Michael, too bad our hands don't reach if only for a minute...love Michael

James Peranteau

Date: 1/17/2011 4:58:00 AM

You've felt, that pulse as well dear poet ! Great write Wilma ! Great write ! I'm going to have to put this in mine favz if ya don't mind ! Much love, james

David Smalling

Date: 1/17/2011 2:00:00 AM

They say our hands fisted mirror our hearts in size, and I say this poem mirrors the longing of it. Good.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2011 8:28:00 PM

A delightful Crystalline that warms the heart. Have a beautiful week, Wilma. Love, Annalise

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 8:23:00 PM

nice, Wilma~ how R U~ enjoyed your write~skat

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/16/2011 4:00:00 PM

Nice images to express the beating of the hearts, Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2011 11:23:00 AM

Hi Wilma, I didn't get your Soup mail yet and have to leave for a while. I'll check back in later, but I think all of your doiditsu poems are extremely well done! Look for your mail later. Must go. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2011 10:14:00 AM

What a romantic image, Wilma. Finding that perfect harmony is a goal sought by many, but few succeed. Excellent crystalline, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/16/2011 9:08:00 AM

So sweetly penned, Wilma! Wat wil ons meer! ...Al die beste en neem goeie sorg vir jou! ...Gert:)

James Fraser

Date: 1/16/2011 8:37:00 AM

Beautifully sweet Wilma. It's a lovely sight seeing two still in love holding hands....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/16/2011 7:36:00 AM

my heart is going pitter patter with this lovely Crystalline Wilma my friend.. u certainly enhance the spirit of romance on Soup and I so appreciate your wonderful words... thankxx for the encouragement for contest entries. the last two have been difficult as not my style of writing but A for effort luv..haha..