Harlequin

I put on my finest and set it in my mind, to
win your precious heart. I took great pain and
effort my best to you to impart. Then I came
before you, to laly my treasures at your
feet . I sang to you sweet love songs and
wrote your poetry. I bowed down before you on
bended knee. Alas you paid no notice, and from
my presence you did flee. Now at a distance I
behold you earnestly. Your beauty is so
radiant, your spirit strong and free. I gasp as
I glance at the revelation
I see. Now I've made a vow to myself and
burned it in  my mind, to never give up, to
somehow get it right. I'll come to you at day
break, at mid-day there I'll be, I'll come to 
you at midnight and sneak into your dreams.
I'll never wain or grow weary of seeking
after thee. Perhaps I'll never win you, this
might surely be, but I'll never give up. I'll
always be the fool in love with thee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 4:48 AM
ever try an never die, before she turns her head, follow in her footsteps, where ever they led....persistence hey...cobber, Don
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 3:34 PM
lol, Thank you me Mate your poetry and your poetic comments I truly love...with love...old Jack
Foulk Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 1:43 PM
yes a very romantic and touching piece of great poetry. thank you for commenting on Heart of Hearts.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Thank you Sir James for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 1:39 AM
Very romantic one! Is it for a contest going on right now? I enjoyed reading this one.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Thank you so much lovely Lady for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack.....no not for contest have only entered one figured I should enter at least one, lol......I don't kid myself I know my poetry is very amature but I do love writing...perhaps I'll improve before I have to start on my bucket list, lol
Everhart Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Hello Jack, I put up a new poem So you will know i did stop by hugs Anita Everhart
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Great to see you, must be excited about your new book good for you..Thank you for your kind comments lovely Lady...with love...old Jack
Everhart Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 11:01 PM
Hi Jack, I am doing fine, thanks for asking, I love this poem, thanks for the kind words sorry i have been working on my new book , so i will be on here from time to time, thanks so much hug Anita Everhart... P.S. I am okay, i just write sad poems, illl chat with you soon,
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Thank you very much for your kind comments, much appreciated lovely Lady...with love...old Jack
Babcock Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 7:18 PM
The sense of longing, of wanting, of being in love comes through on this wonderful write. You captured the emotion perfectly on this write. God Bless Phyl
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind comment lovely Lady....with love...old Jack
Horne Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 10:32 AM
You've captured this one perfectly, Jack
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Thank you mate for your kind comments always great when they come from talented people, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Cooke Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 5:14 AM
ah love, emotion drives us all, love this, has the feelings perfectly described of one who is in love, top write.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind comments means much from talented people like you, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Onclaud Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 2:29 AM
the sense of longing wonderfully permeates here , jack.. what a super fine wirite to " be the fool in love with thee,,"..:) huggs, nette
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments lovely Lady from one so talented, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Ball Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 11:50 PM
Very well said indeed my friend. Well thought out and well presented. Lots of emotion. Easily read and understood which is something I like in a poem. Great job. God Bless, JB
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:04 AM
Thank you so very much lovely Lady for your kind comments....with love...old Jack
A   Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 11:41 PM
dear, jack~ a poem suited for the best.. One is always a fool Jack~ when it comes to love. lol~ you should see how love takes a toll in my perception... yes like a fool... truly enjoyed,..p.d.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:05 AM
Thank you so very much lovely Lady for your kind comments...with love...old Jack
Johnson Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 11:32 PM
Hope it works out. A poem of deep emotion. Thank you for your kind comments. Joyce
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:07 AM
Thank you so much for your sweet comments, that was from long ago and it didn't work out...such is life....with love...old Jack
Johnson Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 11:26 PM
Hope it works out. A poem of deep emotion. Thank you for your kind comments. Joyce
Sivey Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 11:11 PM
Yes, fools rush in--however he has spent many days trying to win her heart. He knows his love for her now, it's true. I loved this poem, it spoke to me of past women that I've longed for...I mostly dreamed about them but it seemed so real.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Thanks kind sir for your kind comments, much appreciate.....with love...old Jack
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