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Hare Today, Gone Tomorrow

One day I was sitting in a field Ogling at my afternoons yield When across the road I seen A lovely meadow so green Cars don't see fur as a shield

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/30/2011 10:55:00 AM
I guess the title tips us off that it was a rabbit's unfortunate encounter with the car. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2011 10:54:00 AM
Well, it may have been road kill, but in the spring green pollen coats the cars and they look like they have green fur. Either way, a fine limerick, James. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2011 11:42:00 AM
uh-oh!! roadkill?!? the poor hare :( oh boohoo :(-- but such is life I suppose...very interesting limerick James :)
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:20:00 PM
lol, nice limerick James... very good Poetry today my friend...Michael
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