Deb Wilson Poet Clerihew

Hardly Shy Mae West

Miss Mae West
Party animal heart in her ample chest
The wily lady a player without reservation
"Come on up and see me" her not so subtle invitation!



** for contest"You Who...Yo Clerihew"
sponsored by Catie Lindsey

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2011 at 6:22 AM Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "You Who...Yo, Cherihew". A well deserved win Deb. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta February 14, 2011 at 6:17 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, deb

Sidney Beck February 13, 2011 at 9:02 AM Well done ! you have gained a much-deserved win in this contest….best wishes….Syd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 11, 2011 at 7:28 AM Congrats Deb on your big win in Catie's contest .. enjoy with luv my friend.. great one..

Kash Poet February 9, 2011 at 10:46 PM Congrats Deb on your big win in this contest of Catie!---kashinath

Tahera Mannan February 9, 2011 at 7:50 PM Many congrats Deb for this wonderful win.

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2011 at 7:27 PM Hey, you did awesome with this one. No wonder you scored high. Congratulations, Deb!

Debbie Guzzi February 9, 2011 at 5:13 PM congrad's on this witty win! Light & Love

Robert Pettit February 9, 2011 at 4:08 PM How did I miss reading this one? Congratulations on winning in the contest.

Francine Roberts February 9, 2011 at 12:45 PM congrats on your win in the contest Deb !

Sara Kendrick February 9, 2011 at 11:50 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

Carrie Richards February 9, 2011 at 11:44 AM Great job....she must have been some seducer.....and not so subtle!! Congratulations on your win!!

Kory Calhoun February 9, 2011 at 11:12 AM Such a clever Clerihew. CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, Kory

Carolyn Devonshire February 9, 2011 at 10:02 AM LOL Nothing subtle about that invitation, Deb. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn

Elton Camp February 7, 2011 at 9:50 AM Well written. Mae West played a lusty gal, but imagine the phrasing that a modern actress would likely use to extend the same invitation. Elton Camp

Francine Roberts February 7, 2011 at 8:53 AM great entry for the contest, best of luck

Nette Onclaud February 7, 2011 at 3:53 AM oh yes, her classic diversion, lol! so fun and witty; i love it, deb! winning wishes in the contest..:) huggs, nette