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Hardly Shy Mae West

Miss Mae West Party animal heart in her ample chest The wily lady a player without reservation "Come on up and see me" her not so subtle invitation! ** for contest"You Who...Yo Clerihew" sponsored by Catie Lindsey

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "You Who...Yo, Cherihew". A well deserved win Deb. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/14/2011 6:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, deb

Sidney Beck

Date: 2/13/2011 9:02:00 AM

Well done ! you have gained a much-deserved win in this contest….best wishes….Syd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 7:28:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your big win in Catie's contest .. enjoy with luv my friend.. great one..

Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2011 10:46:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your big win in this contest of Catie!---kashinath

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/9/2011 7:50:00 PM

Many congrats Deb for this wonderful win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2011 7:27:00 PM

Hey, you did awesome with this one. No wonder you scored high. Congratulations, Deb!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/9/2011 5:13:00 PM

congrad's on this witty win! Light & Love

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/9/2011 4:08:00 PM

How did I miss reading this one? Congratulations on winning in the contest.

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/9/2011 12:45:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Deb !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2011 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/9/2011 11:44:00 AM

Great job....she must have been some seducer.....and not so subtle!! Congratulations on your win!!

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/9/2011 11:12:00 AM

Such a clever Clerihew. CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, Kory

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/9/2011 10:02:00 AM

LOL Nothing subtle about that invitation, Deb. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn

Elton Camp

Date: 2/7/2011 9:50:00 AM

Well written. Mae West played a lusty gal, but imagine the phrasing that a modern actress would likely use to extend the same invitation. Elton Camp

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/7/2011 8:53:00 AM

great entry for the contest, best of luck

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2011 3:53:00 AM

oh yes, her classic diversion, lol! so fun and witty; i love it, deb! winning wishes in the contest..:) huggs, nette