Hardened Thoughts - For Contest

Hardened Thoughts


To those who tell me what I can and can’t
I have no words to sway their mindless curse
nor would they listen should my voice unveil
the emptiness of lips echoless purse,
aspiring to restrain youths sudden joy
assuage depleted chests with stolen gold
sit idly in the chair of hardened thoughts
unable to release the chains of old.

In their hearts lie the tyrants of I can’t
fearful beggars that kneel at open gates
imprisoning the reason of the free
within the total blindness of the fates.

Unable to admit just how they fell
enraptured by this mindless state of hell.



3/5/2016

Submitted to Rob Cormack's "Screwed" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Thirtyseven Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Your hardened thoughts, make a very provocative, thoughtful poem. Great read.
Manassian Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:12 AM
This is a different take on the theme, John. You did sonnet proud with that last couplet packing the punch. Great write.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:18 PM
John, this is great, powerful, I like where you went with the theme, best of luck ~
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