Hard School

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life does test, again and again one day sunshine and next day rain checking to see the way we react how this dream sequence, we enact soul breaking free of fears that chain 14-August-2021

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/14/2021 8:30:00 AM

When we’re up we’re up, when we’re down we’re down, but there’s no half way up, no change, if by fear we are chained… Belle

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/14/2021 10:25:00 PM

Yes, witness consciousness is free

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/14/2021 8:08:00 AM

So true! When we are up, remember to be humble. When your down, there will be a way up. It is a balancing game.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/14/2021 8:24:00 AM

True, Kim, so true