Hard Crawl

This sad tale I tell.
Of water with smell,
One day running,
Took hard fall,
Ended in a crawl,
Next smelled the odor,
Looking up and saw,
Outhouse bottom.



1. This
2. Sad
3. Tale
4. I
5. Tell
6. Of
7. Water
8. With
9. Smell
10. One
11. Day
12. Running
13. Took
14. Hard
15 fall
16. Ended
17. In
18. A
19. Crawl
20. Next
21. Smelled
22. The
23. Odor
24. Looking
25. Up
26. And
27. Saw
28. Outhouse
29. Bottom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 8:50 AM
once again pure excellence my friend
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:38 PM
hahahaha. What a funny win. congratulations, Cecil. LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:49 AM
eww, congrats on your win with this humorous entry
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your win Cecil in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
Bagnall Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Yuck ! :) - thanks for making me smile, congrats onlyour placement in the competition
Dufresne Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 5:07 PM
I guess that would be the finish line for sure! Congrats to you on your win Cecil!
Tideswell Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Congrats on you 3rd place win with this amusing poem ~ Sharon :)
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on your third place win, cecil
Neels Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Cecil, super congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest love Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Congrats Cecil on your super big win in Nikko's contest .. an awesome poem.. an amazing sweet victory ..enjoy your success my dear friend with luv..
K. Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Hi Cecil :) well this just made me laugh! Ewwww poor you but it definitely caught my eye and I do appreciate the laughs I got out of this-- so super congrats on your 3rd place win! :) -- nikko :)
Guzzi Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:32 PM
wow, hard to decide what the purpose is? If you have a chance perhaps you could comment on my blog? Light & Love
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