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Hard Crawl

This sad tale I tell. Of water with smell, One day running, Took hard fall, Ended in a crawl, Next smelled the odor, Looking up and saw, Outhouse bottom. 1. This 2. Sad 3. Tale 4. I 5. Tell 6. Of 7. Water 8. With 9. Smell 10. One 11. Day 12. Running 13. Took 14. Hard 15 fall 16. Ended 17. In 18. A 19. Crawl 20. Next 21. Smelled 22. The 23. Odor 24. Looking 25. Up 26. And 27. Saw 28. Outhouse 29. Bottom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 8:50:00 AM
once again pure excellence my friend
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:38:00 PM
hahahaha. What a funny win. congratulations, Cecil. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:49:00 AM
eww, congrats on your win with this humorous entry
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Date: 9/24/2010 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Cecil in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2010 5:11:00 AM
Yuck ! :) - thanks for making me smile, congrats onlyour placement in the competition
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:07:00 PM
I guess that would be the finish line for sure! Congrats to you on your win Cecil!
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Date: 9/23/2010 3:03:00 PM
Congrats on you 3rd place win with this amusing poem ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place win, cecil
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:23:00 PM
Cecil, super congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest love Wilma
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:13:00 AM
Congrats Cecil on your super big win in Nikko's contest .. an awesome poem.. an amazing sweet victory ..enjoy your success my dear friend with luv..
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:20:00 AM
Hi Cecil :) well this just made me laugh! Ewwww poor you but it definitely caught my eye and I do appreciate the laughs I got out of this-- so super congrats on your 3rd place win! :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:32:00 PM
wow, hard to decide what the purpose is? If you have a chance perhaps you could comment on my blog? Light & Love
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