Harbinger

harbinger amber undertones ruffles summer petticoats ~ autumn starts to breathe 8-13-22 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Contest: Nature Theme Haiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:28:00 PM

I wish I could remember why I told you Soupmail and then did not send one. Did I ever send you one? Anyway, for me, this is top notch. A number one. Congrats.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/25/2022 2:04:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea. Your feedback is such a gift to me! Your Soupmail did finally show up! Soupmail back. So glad you liked this one. I do too! Many thanks and much gratitude.

Charles Messina

Date: 8/24/2022 2:35:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Sam. Congrats on you win! Charlie

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/25/2022 2:03:00 PM

Hi Charlie! So good to see your smiling face again!!! Many thanks. I so appreciate your thoughtful messages! Have really learned to love writing haiku! Blessings to you!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/23/2022 6:48:00 AM

Splendid imagery! I love it. Congratulations on your win and this wonderful haiku my dear friend Sam! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/23/2022 9:31:00 AM

Hello dear friend! I am so glad that I got to share a tiny bit of autumn's glory with you! Made this little haiku even more special! Thank you for your wonderful feedback that gives me such joy! Sending you blessings on a warm autumn breeze.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2022 1:20:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Love your line, "ruffles summer petticoats." Today, be blessed with this win...........

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/23/2022 9:29:00 AM

Hi Paula! Thank you for your note of congratulations! It is so much fun to see nature in imagery. Blessings of beauty to you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/22/2022 7:49:00 AM

Romantic scene. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/23/2022 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Chris! Nature has a romance all of its own. So fun to capture a brief moment in poetry. Blessings!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2022 5:15:00 AM

Sam, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/23/2022 9:26:00 AM

Tania, thank you so much for this wonderful theme and the opportunity to write more haiku which I have learned to love. I am so grateful for your placement. Once again, many thanks for all that you do here on the soup and your creative contest that encourage us to write! Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2022 1:38:00 PM

I love the imagery. Soupmail for you.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/16/2022 1:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea! One of the parts of haiku that I love is its call for striking imagery! Thank you for your affirmation. Checked my soupmail and I didn't see one from you. Maybe it is just taking its own sweet time to arrive!

Constance La France

Date: 8/15/2022 1:22:00 PM

Sam, your Haiku is lovely, best of luck in the contest, blessings ~Constance

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/16/2022 1:52:00 PM

Hi Constance! Many thanks for your lovely message. I so appreciate your visit and best wishes. They mean a lot to me. Blessings my friend!

Anil Deo

Date: 8/15/2022 11:43:00 AM

Wow, petticoats and all. Love it

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/14/2022 9:23:00 AM

Oh, I wish autumn would come soon! I could feel the nearness through this majestic haiku.