Harbinger

harbinger

amber undertones
 ruffles summer petticoats ~
  autumn starts to breathe

8-13-22
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Contest: Nature Theme Haiku

autumnsummerhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2022 at 1:28 PM

I wish I could remember why I told you Soupmail and then did not send one. Did I ever send you one? Anyway, for me, this is top notch. A number one. Congrats.

Sam Kauffman

August 25, 2022 at 2:04 PM

Thank you so much Andrea. Your feedback is such a gift to me! Your Soupmail did finally show up! Soupmail back. So glad you liked this one. I do too! Many thanks and much gratitude.

Charles Messina

August 24, 2022 at 2:35 AM

Beautiful haiku, Sam. Congrats on you win! Charlie

Sam Kauffman

August 25, 2022 at 2:03 PM

Hi Charlie! So good to see your smiling face again!!! Many thanks. I so appreciate your thoughtful messages! Have really learned to love writing haiku! Blessings to you!

Len Gasun

August 23, 2022 at 6:48 AM

Splendid imagery! I love it. Congratulations on your win and this wonderful haiku my dear friend Sam! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Sam Kauffman

August 23, 2022 at 9:31 AM

Hello dear friend! I am so glad that I got to share a tiny bit of autumn's glory with you! Made this little haiku even more special! Thank you for your wonderful feedback that gives me such joy! Sending you blessings on a warm autumn breeze.

Paula Goldsmith

August 22, 2022 at 1:20 PM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Love your line, "ruffles summer petticoats." Today, be blessed with this win...........

Sam Kauffman

August 23, 2022 at 9:29 AM

Hi Paula! Thank you for your note of congratulations! It is so much fun to see nature in imagery. Blessings of beauty to you.

Christuraj Alex

August 22, 2022 at 7:49 AM

Romantic scene. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

August 23, 2022 at 9:27 AM

Thank you Chris! Nature has a romance all of its own. So fun to capture a brief moment in poetry. Blessings!

Tania Kitchin

August 22, 2022 at 5:15 AM

Sam, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!

Sam Kauffman

August 23, 2022 at 9:26 AM

Tania, thank you so much for this wonderful theme and the opportunity to write more haiku which I have learned to love. I am so grateful for your placement. Once again, many thanks for all that you do here on the soup and your creative contest that encourage us to write! Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

August 16, 2022 at 1:38 PM

I love the imagery. Soupmail for you.

Sam Kauffman

August 16, 2022 at 1:50 PM

Thank you so much Andrea! One of the parts of haiku that I love is its call for striking imagery! Thank you for your affirmation. Checked my soupmail and I didn't see one from you. Maybe it is just taking its own sweet time to arrive!