Happy Place

Trauma has wrapped me in its slimy tentacles 
Tightening, till my depression becomes clinical

Man with yellow pad listens obligingly
Then into my happy place he is guiding me

I imagine my beautiful tropical island home
All is serene and I am finally alone

Turquoise waters pet the shores sand 
Oh so ready to rest from life in this land

With long hypnotic strokes, newness is washed away
Carried into the Icy depths of ancient days

I sit, contented for once, on the hot white grains
Coconut in hand yet taste of... oatmeal remains 

I cannot tell the time, nor anything truly measure
In my island retreat, alone, I will stay forever. 

      *the nurse continues spooning oatmeal into the patients open maw
Wiping his chin after each bite and closing his jaws. 

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Date: 7/30/2024 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad "Happy Place" write. The mind is very powerful for good or bad... Have a very fun day writing away...........
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/30/2024 12:44:00 PM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 6/15/2024 5:27:00 AM
Oh gosh so sad. Alzheimers? Quadriplegic? MS? It doesn't matter, the mind can take over for a bit. I actually wrote an 8 part epic with a similar theme titled Elan World. Not posted here currently
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/15/2024 6:37:00 PM
I can if you want
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/15/2024 6:24:00 PM
Ooo...email?
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/15/2024 6:23:00 PM
Just clinically insane I suppose! Living the dream inside a dream rather than face this gray world.
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