Happy Husband Hears No Alarm

Waking with a smile, eyes bouncing green, dear husband
makes me hold back my scream, desire to pull over sheets.
Later, I find you sitting like Buddha, gazing at the land,
shifting as each birds lifts and soars and tweet tweets.

I watch you in silence, pick up slippers, my piles of papers
find my own breakfast to leave you undisturbed in dream,
you thank me so many ways, your face relaxed, finger tapers
held on belly, sometimes I wonder if you see past the gleam

Of heavenly contentment, lap of pool, sun blazing warm
the face so bruised by clenched jaw now so smooth
I never dare to battle you, drive you against walls or alarm.
Retirement is a silence of weighty falling before well oiled groove.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bangalee Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 5:25 AM
beautiful poetic expression
Oyewole Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Way to go, Sheri! Congrats on your fine win!!!
Pettit Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 11:55 PM
It's amazing how you got every other line to rhyme. This is an impressive write.
Harper Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Thanks so much Robert
Onclaud Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 12:51 PM
a lovely piece, sheri... time to relax and really live!.. congrats!
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Thank you Nette!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 10:51 AM
One of the best, congrats.
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 5:55 PM
Thank you Richard, just logged on, can't wait to see
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Sheri I so enjoyed thus entry especially the last stanza. Congrats on your well deserved win - Connie
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 5:55 PM
Thanks so much Connie
Kayode Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 4:40 AM
Congrats on the win Sheri . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Thank you KAYOD5, appreciate it!
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:47 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, sheri
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Thanks so much for offering this contest, Dr. Ram Mehta, appreciate it very much!
Richards Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 6:43 PM
I was fearful at first, when my own husband retired, that it would change my life, even more than his! But as we have some acreage, and a lot to take care of, he still works full time, so it seems, only out in our back yard! I know of what your poem indicates however, it can play havoc with a wife and her own routine!! :) Ps......thank you so much for my placement in your great contest..so honored am I !! :)
Harper Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 7:14 PM
Thanks much Carrie, I hope you have an enjoyable retirement!
Williams Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 2:29 AM
Sheri I think I would be bored in retirement, good poem...David
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