Happy Husband Hears No Alarm

Waking with a smile, eyes bouncing green, dear husband
makes me hold back my scream, desire to pull over sheets.
Later, I find you sitting like Buddha, gazing at the land,
shifting as each birds lifts and soars and tweet tweets.

I watch you in silence, pick up slippers, my piles of papers
find my own breakfast to leave you undisturbed in dream,
you thank me so many ways, your face relaxed, finger tapers
held on belly, sometimes I wonder if you see past the gleam

Of heavenly contentment, lap of pool, sun blazing warm
the face so bruised by clenched jaw now so smooth
I never dare to battle you, drive you against walls or alarm.
Retirement is a silence of weighty falling before well oiled groove.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/22/2019 5:25:00 AM
beautiful poetic expression
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Date: 3/4/2014 2:19:00 PM
Way to go, Sheri! Congrats on your fine win!!!
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Date: 3/2/2014 11:55:00 PM
It's amazing how you got every other line to rhyme. This is an impressive write.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/3/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert
Date: 3/2/2014 12:51:00 PM
a lovely piece, sheri... time to relax and really live!.. congrats!
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/2/2014 5:54:00 PM
Thank you Nette!
Date: 3/2/2014 10:51:00 AM
One of the best, congrats.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/2/2014 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Richard, just logged on, can't wait to see
Date: 3/2/2014 9:09:00 AM
Sheri I so enjoyed thus entry especially the last stanza. Congrats on your well deserved win - Connie
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/2/2014 5:55:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie
Date: 3/2/2014 4:40:00 AM
Congrats on the win Sheri . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/2/2014 5:56:00 PM
Thank you KAYOD5, appreciate it!
Date: 3/2/2014 3:47:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, sheri
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/2/2014 5:56:00 PM
Thanks so much for offering this contest, Dr. Ram Mehta, appreciate it very much!
Date: 2/24/2014 6:43:00 PM
I was fearful at first, when my own husband retired, that it would change my life, even more than his! But as we have some acreage, and a lot to take care of, he still works full time, so it seems, only out in our back yard! I know of what your poem indicates however, it can play havoc with a wife and her own routine!! :) Ps......thank you so much for my placement in your great contest..so honored am I !! :)
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/1/2014 7:14:00 PM
Thanks much Carrie, I hope you have an enjoyable retirement!
Date: 2/24/2014 2:29:00 AM
Sheri I think I would be bored in retirement, good poem...David
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