Happy Fizz-In Party

Here is my debut poem about prison
  A mighty fine place to do your biz in

Residents use the corner to take a whiz in
  Add soapy water ~ Presto! A 'Fizz-in!'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 1:04 PM
One of the more serious prison poems.
Wolf Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 5:30 PM
This is tongue-in-cheek, I hope! Happy Fizzies Party! :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 10:19 AM
A work of fiction, I presume:)
Wolf Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Fiction -- yes. Also --- fission! lol. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Not where we want to end up in!
Wolf Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Nope... Esp. if our end is up, if you catch my drift...
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