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Happy Cloud, Smoke Clouded Guy Vs Voice of Truth

My Friend Tom Logic was The Smoke-Clouded Guy and i was The Voice of Truth :D Smoke-Clouded Guy Says: Nicotine to make me high.. Emotions that can fly.. Pain about to die.. Voice of truth says: A free-way pass to a venom which gives you a lack in living? Tell me why? Smoke-Clouded Guy Says: Tell you why? When from childhood life waved goodbye.. I had this numbing pain in my vein.. Living for vain I had to Smoke trouble away Voice of truth says: And risk Living? Risk a body that was gifted& pure, risk health? That others would die for? Smoke-Clouded Guy Says: Why favor my life? Why live on the edge of the knife? Is happiness just another sad cloud? Can't u hear my screams that are loud? If wounds wont mend.. Now with nicotine I will blend Till they heal and lose the sense to feel Voice of truth says: To deny a blessing is nobler then? To deprive your health will numb the pain of this so-called Happy Cloud? Then this so-called Delight is just a fraud to make you feel better, to steal away the minutes while you would've got years A lack of beauty you will gain, a reek of bad odor it will cause, your teeth no longer the blazing white? Why take instead of care? To your own shell? Smoke-Clouded Guy Says: I feel my soul is down low The sun.. Is your truth you state? Voice of truth says: A Message to God you have sent, "my Soul you grant, i will play" Smoke-Clouded Guy Says: Now, after you.. I have smoking to hate And.. I wish.. A better fate Words crumble and blush by your power Your words are the drug that is.. Truth Voice of truth says: Turn back you say? It is never late? For God has his arms open wide for another Fate And you know what I say? It’s your own good that we display? Smoke-Clouded Guy Says: I for one.. Turn my face, to what's bright.. This cloud circulating me.. Will fade away Voice of truth says: Welcome to this beautiful place, a ticket of health you will once regain :D Smoke-Clouded Guy Says: And it's you I thank... To my page.. I begin blank Voice of truth says: My regards, my awaits to all of your mistakes ;)

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Date: 9/11/2011 4:22:00 PM
What an inspirational write! Loved reading your poem today Louzana!
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 9/11/2011 4:24:00 PM
Thank you ! :D I Really Appreciate that :D ! :)

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