Happy Birthday Mom

I know it's your birthday
So don't try to hide it,
I know you have some hopes
But you are not able to hide it.

Family has always been important and vital
"Most caring Mom" is your new title.

Birth day which means a blissful day,
As I am blessed with you all the way.
Irrespective of the day
You are born for this place.

Cut, blow and light,
This is not the only way to highlight.
Love, affection and care,
To make you feel that you are near.

Although you don't celebrate it,
Nevertheless, try to make it.

I could not have imagined anything more than YOU,
Oh Mom! Oh Mom! Oh Mom! I just love you.

You are a simple dame,
Who just know how to cut the cake.
Wish to celebrate your birthday splendidly,
Just love to chit-chat with you timelessly.

Needless to say, your effort of this abode
You created a Universe for prolong.

Mom :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/15/2013 1:23:00 AM
Hi Gurling, This is very sweet dedicating a poem to your Mum on her Birthday (one word not two) I feel you could have put a little more into this and you would have scored a lot higher rating, but if you are new to poetry it is fine, you have to start somewhere, good try. John
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Date: 6/15/2013 1:27:00 AM
Gurling welcome to Poetry Soup, I was also welcomed last month so I am new here also, so feel free to message me by the Poetry Soup Wall, all the best to you. John
Date: 6/10/2013 8:03:00 PM
Gurleen , a deep approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/10/2013 6:22:00 AM
Welcome to Poetrysoup Gurleen. May you enjoy the site for years to come. Everyone here will help you along the way if they can or they will find someone who is capable. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:11:00 PM
Gurleen. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda
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