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Happy Birthday Mom

To Mom and From Kyle With the utmost respect Today is your birthday You thought I'd forget? What a joyous occasion For being alive When people are thinking You turned 35! With awesome finesse You've gone through life's gauntlet Your wise and compassionate Not to mention accomplished! So many respect you And not without merit So many good traits I've been glad to inherit Without further adieu I'm excited to say May your 59th birthday Be a fabulous day! By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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Ashok Kumar Mishra

Date: 4/2/2018 7:55:00 PM

Wow Kyle...."So many good traits I've been glad to inherit " this shows your respect towards her and this is most deep line in your poem for which she will be proud of.... Cause you too are expressing those traits in your action and acknowledging it... So adorable!!!

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/2/2012 11:08:00 AM

Very moving! Some people take mothers' love too much for evident and forget to mention it openly and tell it like you do. As a mother, I can testify how greedy we are and much longing for sweet hugs and looks and smiles and words, especially! Keep on being such a blessing to your mother...:) Hanitra

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/7/2012 11:44:00 AM

Wow! sounds like a perfect mom not to mention the son! I'll bet she was ecstatic over getting such a wonderful wish!