Raul Moreno Poet Quatrain

Happy Birthday Conor

Happy birthday Conor,
  Today’s your special day.
As I write these words,
  You are so far way.

You’re a special person who,
  Deserves deserving words.
So I penned some down,
  That this day deserves.

Today you are eighteen;
  I hope you have a blast.
I wish you a happy one,
  From Oklahoma to Belfast. 







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This poem is for Conor Jordan,
a fellow souper and today's his birthday.

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Aakanksha Srinivasan December 30, 2008 at 5:10 AM Very nicely written and it's amazing how you've made the words rhyme! It's a very sweet poem all in all and of course touching.. Aakanksha

Steve Edmonds December 28, 2008 at 2:12 AM Hope you had a Happy Birthday and a Merry Christmas. ~Caramel

Elizabeth Neal December 23, 2008 at 4:38 PM Congrats to making the hot list. Love Elizabeth

Matthew Pawlak December 21, 2008 at 7:28 PM Good poem. You have such a heart to think of others in your poems . And thank you for your words regarding mine ....Matt

Elaine George December 20, 2008 at 1:26 PM What a kind giving heart you have, dear Raul. Lovely poem. lainie

Kristin Reynolds December 20, 2008 at 2:38 AM HJappy birthday Conor!!!!! You are such a gift, Raul, bless you always, love, Kristin

Elizabeth Neal December 19, 2008 at 4:10 PM Happy birthday Conor eighteenth is a special birthday. May you have many more and best wishes to you. Love Elizabeth

Lawrence Ingle December 19, 2008 at 2:22 PM Nice birthday poem. excellent.

Carrie Richards December 19, 2008 at 1:51 PM Happy Birthday!, and many many more to your friend. You are a true friend to so many, Raul....Bless you and wishing you a blessed Holiday!! Love, Carrie

Daniel Neal December 19, 2008 at 1:42 PM Bests wishes to Conor, May he spend a lovley day with his family and friends. May all your wishes come true. Happy Birthday. DN

Sharon Winter December 19, 2008 at 10:08 AM Happy birthday Conor! Raul, you are a prince of poets. I agree with Robin, may it all come back to you three-fold if not more. Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass December 19, 2008 at 9:50 AM Lovely dedication. This is penned perfectly, Raul. I'm sure Conor likes his present! As always, thank you for sharing all your wonderful words with everyone. I have heard the expresion that what we do comes back to us three-fold. I wish you all the glory you deserve. Love Robin

Christopher Higgins December 19, 2008 at 6:00 AM Raul your heart is wonderful.