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Seasons like emotions fade away. Where poisonous rain once blistered susceptible surfaces, sapphire skies showcase saffron sun, silently soothing somber scars. Yesterday was a vacant colouring book. Today is a kaleidoscopic of colours, illuminating every blank page. Rainbow rivers stream through veins, as eyes paint positive portraits. Pen flows like exotic fruit juices, blending sweet smoothies. Essence of fruit salad zest, liberates from a coconut mind. Psychedelic pineapple heart, nurtures mango soul's serenity. Sentimental sun rays embrace, soaking warmth deep inside. Happiness is tranquil like a pleasant fresh ocean breeze.
Silent One 2 February 2018

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Date: 6/7/2019 3:58:00 PM
Hi Silent One: each line is like a like a breath of fresh air My compliments!
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Date: 3/9/2018 10:41:00 PM
I love the way you mixed the words and brought so many beautiful words together. Beautiful :))
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Date: 2/17/2018 12:08:00 AM
there is beauty in every line ,great writing
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Date: 2/15/2018 10:58:00 PM
Wow, SO... "Rainbow rivers stream through veins". Awesome imagery throughout your poem. Superb.
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Date: 2/11/2018 4:39:00 PM
Can't imagine where your words, thoughts, feelings come from, so visual, awesome. bbn
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Silent One
Date: 2/11/2018 4:45:00 PM
From being happy... Thanks
Date: 2/6/2018 8:07:00 PM
A wonderful write making me want some tropical kind of drink. Nice one. love phyl
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Phyl..
Date: 2/6/2018 3:11:00 AM
Such a pleasant write SO... So beautifully written... Thanks for sharing this alluring piece...
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thanks..
Date: 2/5/2018 3:34:00 AM
Beautiful and clever, nice use of alliteration and similes as well, Great one.
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thanks..
Date: 2/4/2018 10:01:00 AM
Excellent Silent One. A pleasure to read today :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Heidi..
Date: 2/3/2018 8:29:00 PM
Wow such a delightful and authentic piece of fine poetry. Love the inspiration of the happy sentiments and the combination of kaleidoscopic fruit flavored savouring the soul of poetic imagery. Very creative of you. A most imaginative charmed piece of writing.
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne..
Date: 2/3/2018 7:15:00 PM
Beautiful write, S.O. - very insightful. Glad the Oh Dear, What can the Matter be verse gave you a smile. Best to you - Bob
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Bob
Date: 2/3/2018 6:26:00 PM
A soul nurturing poem and song Silent One; now I have a sudden urge to eat a pineapple on a beach! A happy poem and song that lifted my spirits!~Che :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 1:14:00 PM
Glad it inspired you to ear fruit..Thanks Che
Date: 2/3/2018 12:24:00 PM
Though a tad saturated with alliteration (lol) I love the positivity in this. "Pen flows like exotic fruit juices, blending sweet smoothies" would have been better if you could have mentioned PEARS specifically ... but it will suffice :D
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 1:15:00 PM
Nothing wrong with a bit of alliteration...Pears are not as exotic as pineapple and mango lol
Date: 2/3/2018 3:35:00 AM
Hi Silent, You've penned such a positive and colorful write. Happiness is something to strive for, although it can be hard to achieve. It can be found. Excellent job. PS, I like the song "Happy " but this is my first time hearing this version:-)Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 1:19:00 PM
Its the best thing to strive for.. thanks Alexis..
Date: 2/2/2018 11:48:00 PM
Happiness sometimes comes in short supply in small spurts but is a beautiful thing to embrace in the moment... something we create but is sometimes difficult to do so...you certainly create happy images to dance across your readers minds here :) best wishes!
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 1:19:00 PM
Thank you Melissa.. Glad you liked it
Date: 2/2/2018 9:57:00 PM
...correction: a pineapple and coconut cake...yum...It makes me "happy' just to see others eat it. It's what I call a "happy place".
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 2:19:00 PM
Sounds yummy, Thank you Carole..
Date: 2/2/2018 9:42:00 PM
Lovely poem, ZZ. I love the references to rainbows and fruit and the "pleasant fresh ocean breeze". Funny since I made a pineapple cake today. :)
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Date: 2/2/2018 5:29:00 PM
Gorgeous and HaPPY images here, Silent One. I love that song so much too.
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Silent One
Date: 2/4/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Date: 2/2/2018 3:58:00 PM
Hello Silent, What a beautifully written free verse here!! Most Excellent!! The magic of your words, verse, and images here are a treat for all to see, read, and reflect on. Be Happy!! Yes, for sure!! Best Wishes, Gary (P.S. Thanks for your recent comments on my latest poems -- always a pleasure to hear from you!!) GB
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2018 5:17:00 PM
Thank you Gary, always appreciate your visits..
Date: 2/2/2018 3:54:00 PM
Nice how you switch it up and your alliteration is crazy nice
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2018 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Normie..
Date: 2/2/2018 2:15:00 PM
- Sounds wonderful, S.O. ... thank you for encouraging enjoyment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2018 5:21:00 PM
Happiness is contagious... Thanks Anne Lise..
Date: 2/2/2018 1:58:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mnHlGONToIc
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2018 5:22:00 PM
Nice song, interesting video thanks...
Date: 2/2/2018 1:23:00 PM
I have always wanted to write like this but I can only write in prose I do like this very colourful I am crap at commenting as well but I did enjoy it
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2018 5:23:00 PM
Your comment is fine Brian, and you can write without using prose, just takes a little practice.. Thanks for the visit..
Date: 2/2/2018 10:49:00 AM
Sweet like fruit salad :) delicious!
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2018 5:24:00 PM
Nothing like a sweet fruit salad... Thanks Mo
Date: 2/2/2018 10:37:00 AM
You are just amaaaaaazing at alliteration!!!! "susceptible surfaces, sapphire skies showcase saffron sun, silently soothing somber scars." The song put me in the mood and your uplifting write took me there!!! So nice to see this other side of your pen Silent One! ~Judy
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2018 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Judy...
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