Silent One Poet Free verse

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Happy

Seasons like emotions fade away.
Where poisonous rain once 
blistered susceptible surfaces,
sapphire skies showcase saffron sun,
silently soothing somber scars.

Yesterday was a vacant colouring book.
Today is a kaleidoscopic of colours, 
illuminating every blank page.
Rainbow rivers stream through veins,
as eyes paint positive portraits.

Pen flows like exotic fruit juices,
blending sweet smoothies.
Essence of fruit salad zest, 
liberates from a coconut mind.
Psychedelic pineapple heart,
nurtures mango soul's serenity.

Sentimental sun rays embrace,
soaking warmth deep inside.
Happiness is tranquil like a
pleasant fresh ocean breeze.

Silent One
2 February 2018

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Ralph Sergi June 7, 2019 at 3:58 PM Hi Silent One: each line is like a like a breath of fresh air My compliments!

Patricia Leduc March 9, 2018 at 10:41 PM I love the way you mixed the words and brought so many beautiful words together. Beautiful :))

Echoing Greens February 17, 2018 at 12:08 AM there is beauty in every line ,great writing

Line Gauthier February 15, 2018 at 10:58 PM Wow, SO... "Rainbow rivers stream through veins". Awesome imagery throughout your poem. Superb.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 11, 2018 at 4:39 PM Can't imagine where your words, thoughts, feelings come from, so visual, awesome. bbn Silent One February 11, 2018 at 4:45 PM From being happy... Thanks

Phyllis Babcock February 6, 2018 at 8:07 PM A wonderful write making me want some tropical kind of drink. Nice one. love phyl Silent One February 7, 2018 at 4:56 PM Thank you Phyl..

Supraja Kannan February 6, 2018 at 3:11 AM Such a pleasant write SO... So beautifully written... Thanks for sharing this alluring piece... Silent One February 7, 2018 at 4:56 PM Thanks..

Normie Payton February 5, 2018 at 3:34 AM Beautiful and clever, nice use of alliteration and similes as well, Great one. Silent One February 7, 2018 at 4:56 PM Thanks..

Heidi Sands February 4, 2018 at 10:01 AM Excellent Silent One. A pleasure to read today :) Silent One February 4, 2018 at 1:07 PM Thank you Heidi..

Suzanne C. Goudreau February 3, 2018 at 8:29 PM Wow such a delightful and authentic piece of fine poetry. Love the inspiration of the happy sentiments and the combination of kaleidoscopic fruit flavored savouring the soul of poetic imagery. Very creative of you. A most imaginative charmed piece of writing. Silent One February 4, 2018 at 1:12 PM Thank you Suzanne..

Robert L. Hinshaw February 3, 2018 at 7:15 PM Beautiful write, S.O. - very insightful. Glad the Oh Dear, What can the Matter be verse gave you a smile. Best to you - Bob Silent One February 4, 2018 at 1:13 PM Thanks Bob

Cheryl Hoffman February 3, 2018 at 6:26 PM A soul nurturing poem and song Silent One; now I have a sudden urge to eat a pineapple on a beach! A happy poem and song that lifted my spirits!~Che :) Silent One February 4, 2018 at 1:14 PM Glad it inspired you to ear fruit..Thanks Che

Becca Teagan February 3, 2018 at 12:24 PM Though a tad saturated with alliteration (lol) I love the positivity in this. "Pen flows like exotic fruit juices, blending sweet smoothies" would have been better if you could have mentioned PEARS specifically ... but it will suffice :D Silent One February 4, 2018 at 1:15 PM Nothing wrong with a bit of alliteration...Pears are not as exotic as pineapple and mango lol

Alexis Y. February 3, 2018 at 3:35 AM Hi Silent, You've penned such a positive and colorful write. Happiness is something to strive for, although it can be hard to achieve. It can be found. Excellent job. PS, I like the song "Happy " but this is my first time hearing this version:-)Alexis Silent One February 4, 2018 at 1:19 PM Its the best thing to strive for.. thanks Alexis..

Melissa Tracy February 2, 2018 at 11:48 PM Happiness sometimes comes in short supply in small spurts but is a beautiful thing to embrace in the moment... something we create but is sometimes difficult to do so...you certainly create happy images to dance across your readers minds here :) best wishes! Silent One February 4, 2018 at 1:19 PM Thank you Melissa.. Glad you liked it

Carole Duet February 2, 2018 at 9:57 PM ...correction: a pineapple and coconut cake...yum...It makes me "happy' just to see others eat it. It's what I call a "happy place". Silent One February 4, 2018 at 2:19 PM Sounds yummy, Thank you Carole..

Carole Duet February 2, 2018 at 9:42 PM Lovely poem, ZZ. I love the references to rainbows and fruit and the "pleasant fresh ocean breeze". Funny since I made a pineapple cake today. :)

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2018 at 5:29 PM Gorgeous and HaPPY images here, Silent One. I love that song so much too. Silent One February 4, 2018 at 2:20 PM Thank you Andrea..

Gary Bateman February 2, 2018 at 3:58 PM Hello Silent, What a beautifully written free verse here!! Most Excellent!! The magic of your words, verse, and images here are a treat for all to see, read, and reflect on. Be Happy!! Yes, for sure!! Best Wishes, Gary (P.S. Thanks for your recent comments on my latest poems -- always a pleasure to hear from you!!) GB Silent One February 2, 2018 at 5:17 PM Thank you Gary, always appreciate your visits..

Normie Payton February 2, 2018 at 3:54 PM Nice how you switch it up and your alliteration is crazy nice Silent One February 2, 2018 at 5:17 PM Thanks Normie..

Anne-Lise Andresen February 2, 2018 at 2:15 PM - Sounds wonderful, S.O. ... thank you for encouraging enjoyment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Silent One February 2, 2018 at 5:21 PM Happiness is contagious... Thanks Anne Lise..

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton February 2, 2018 at 1:58 PM https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mnHlGONToIc Silent One February 2, 2018 at 5:22 PM Nice song, interesting video thanks...

Brian Cotton February 2, 2018 at 1:23 PM I have always wanted to write like this but I can only write in prose I do like this very colourful I am crap at commenting as well but I did enjoy it Silent One February 2, 2018 at 5:23 PM Your comment is fine Brian, and you can write without using prose, just takes a little practice.. Thanks for the visit..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 2, 2018 at 10:49 AM Sweet like fruit salad :) delicious! Silent One February 2, 2018 at 5:24 PM Nothing like a sweet fruit salad... Thanks Mo

Judith S February 2, 2018 at 10:37 AM You are just amaaaaaazing at alliteration!!!! "susceptible surfaces, sapphire skies showcase saffron sun, silently soothing somber scars." The song put me in the mood and your uplifting write took me there!!! So nice to see this other side of your pen Silent One! ~Judy Silent One February 2, 2018 at 5:25 PM Thank you Judy...

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