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Date written: 02/27/2024

Happiness

Happiness is...
Starting each dawn
With a bright smile, 
Notwithstanding
Disgruntled faces here and there.
Greeting people hello 
With a friendly wave, 
And, of course, a smile;
Friend or stranger, it doesn't matter.
Playing with your children 
In the backyard, out in the park.
Taking the dogs out for a walk.
Giving of yourself 
To God, and to nature.
Complete detachment 
From negative influences 
And toxic people.
Surrounding yourself 
With people who genuinely love 
And care about you.
Doing whatever you enjoy doing 
To the best of your ability.
Loving yourself
Inside out, outside in;
Warts and all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 3:36 AM
Beautiful indeed ! This opens the door wide to happiness. Congratulations on your great win dear Edward. This is my FAVE.
Ibeh Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and fave, Valsa:-) Most obliged.
La France Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:31 AM
Edward, an excellent free verse poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
Ibeh Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 8:13 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, congratulations and my placement, Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Messina Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:18 PM
There you go again, Edward. Showing off your wonderful talent... please, never stop :) Congratulations on your winning poem! ~Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:32 PM
Thank you so much for the visit, compliment and encouragement, Charlie:-) Most appreciated.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Happiness is everything you said it is Edward. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Ibeh Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Thank you very much, Belle:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Happiness" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day.............
Ibeh Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:57 AM
- A wonderful pleasure to read, Edward :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Ibeh Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Poet Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations, Edward, on the top-winning achievement; your poem is so lovely, and I like the way you depicted the striking metaphors.
Ibeh Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Thank very much indeed, Lasaad:-)
Seeker Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Wise counsel this ~ “Complete detachment From negative influences And toxic people”
Ibeh Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
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