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Happiness

To what I owe this joy I have no clue for it took years to grow this little seed Some days I had to dig to find its hue and other times I just knew what to do I do not own a smile for every face for sadness often creeps inside my heart Sometimes it disappears without a trace that little joy in me that once took part She is a butterfly that often flies somedays she sits upon my window sill and other times, cocooned by tries she's bittersweet, elusive, gone at will It is no lie she cannot fly when maimed nor sit upon a shoulder filled with gloom so many dark nights of the soul she claimed then fleetingly she left this birthing womb To what I owe this joy? I have no clue perhaps in letting go of past arrears we spring up hope and chase away the blues perhaps when sorrow leaves then joy appears. February 26, 2023 Sponsor Constance La France Contest Name Writing Challenge -H Words

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Date: 3/2/2023 12:44:00 AM
Mystic, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/2/2023 4:58:00 AM
Thank you dear Constance for honoring my poem, have a blessed day xo
Date: 2/28/2023 6:53:00 PM
Undoubtedly, when sorrow leaves joy appears. A reminder to all in sadness. Lovely write, Vie. Congratulations on your winning poem! ~charlie
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Date: 3/2/2023 4:59:00 AM
Thanks dear Charles for commenting
Date: 2/28/2023 4:33:00 PM
That’s so lovely Rose, when the seed of happiness is full grown one is never on their own. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 3/2/2023 4:59:00 AM
Thanks dear Belle for your kind comment
Date: 2/28/2023 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Love your ending. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 3/2/2023 4:59:00 AM
Thank you dear Paula, much appreciated
Date: 2/28/2023 10:05:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, dear Vie Rose :) - hugs
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Date: 3/2/2023 4:59:00 AM
Thank you dear Sunshine for your presence here
Date: 2/26/2023 1:47:00 PM
- A grief can be heavy for a small seed ... happiness is the goal ... a beautiful poem, Vie Rose - best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/26/2023 6:08:00 AM
Very well written, Vi. Your last line sure leaves the reader sometning to think about. My mom always said, "happiness is a state of mind" that may be oversimplifying it but it makes sense. It's like everything else. You don't know until it's gone. Things can always get worse.
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Date: 2/26/2023 6:05:00 AM
Much enjoyed the voice of your poem, Vienna. It took years to grow this little seed--therein is the prescription to grow happiness. Awesome thoughts.
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Date: 2/26/2023 5:29:00 AM
What a great metaphoric write, Vie. Happiness is so elusive so we must make the best of it. Hugs.
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Date: 2/26/2023 5:16:00 AM
What an insightful take on happiness, Vie!
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