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Happily Finding Bliss

soul love held fast quiet now she rises slowly she makes her moves delicately she steers me swiftly into a world of her choosing. gracefully flow into her well-thought out lead happily finding myself and my bliss. Written: Jan 9, 2019 Contest: Fibonacci Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 1/14/2019 10:44:00 AM

Good job Caren! Congratulations!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/14/2019 11:39:00 AM

Thank you. I was glad to find the syllable counter which Dear Heart told me about. I am sure that helped.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2019 8:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great 1 place in the contest, Caren :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/13/2019 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much. I was honored and humbled. I have only tried to do two of these kind of poems. I may try more now.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/12/2019 4:36:00 PM

Very nicely done, Caren, congrats on your win! :-) <3

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/12/2019 6:45:00 PM

Thank you Gregory. It is due to good friends that I never have to look at the winners. If I get something you all tell me. If I do not, I will not have to peek and feel badly.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2019 1:35:00 PM

Hi Caren, We all need to find this! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/12/2019 6:45:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. I appreciate it.

Constance La France

Date: 1/12/2019 1:30:00 PM

Caren, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing Fibonacci ~

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/12/2019 6:47:00 PM

Thank you Constance. I am so glad that you liked it. I liked it myself, but I know how hard contests are and there are so many good ones! I did use the internet site you cited so my syllables would be right. That I did do.