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Happily Finding Bliss


                                                soul
                                                love
                                             held fast
                                            quiet now
                                        she rises slowly
                             she makes her moves delicately
                 she steers me swiftly into a world of her choosing.
gracefully flow into her well-thought out lead happily finding myself and my bliss.

Written: Jan 9, 2019          Contest:  Fibonacci             Sponsor: Dear Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/14/2019 10:44:00 AM
Good job Caren! Congratulations!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/14/2019 11:39:00 AM
Thank you. I was glad to find the syllable counter which Dear Heart told me about. I am sure that helped.
Date: 1/13/2019 8:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great 1 place in the contest, Caren :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/13/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much. I was honored and humbled. I have only tried to do two of these kind of poems. I may try more now.
Date: 1/12/2019 4:36:00 PM
Very nicely done, Caren, congrats on your win! :-) <3
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Date: 1/12/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Gregory. It is due to good friends that I never have to look at the winners. If I get something you all tell me. If I do not, I will not have to peek and feel badly.
Date: 1/12/2019 1:35:00 PM
Hi Caren, We all need to find this! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/12/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Alexis. I appreciate it.
Date: 1/12/2019 1:30:00 PM
Caren, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing Fibonacci ~
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Date: 1/12/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Constance. I am so glad that you liked it. I liked it myself, but I know how hard contests are and there are so many good ones! I did use the internet site you cited so my syllables would be right. That I did do.
Date: 1/12/2019 1:28:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Caren. Fabulously done.
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Date: 1/12/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Line. I am amazed kind of.
Date: 1/12/2019 12:14:00 PM
Beautiful Caren and a stylish shape. Congrats on your win, a style of poetry I must try in the future maybe. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 1/12/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Ann. Try them all. That is where the fun is.
Date: 1/12/2019 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! An intriguing write. Well done my friend. :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/12/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Chantelle. It was fun to try.
Date: 1/12/2019 11:02:00 AM
back with congratulations on your first tier win!
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Date: 1/12/2019 6:48:00 PM
Thank you P.S. You liked it before too I remember.
Date: 1/10/2019 7:25:00 PM
Great shape you have written in. Wonderfully done my friend. Good luck in the contest....peter
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/11/2019 3:39:00 AM
Thank you Peter. It matters not about contests as far as I am concerned. I run them to help people think. It is like comparing wallboard to apricots. You cannot compare poetry, only like what you like that minute.
Date: 1/10/2019 8:22:00 AM
she steers me swiftly into a world of her choosing.-- nice write :) (soupmail)
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Date: 1/10/2019 6:09:00 PM
I am dashing over there now P.S.
Date: 1/10/2019 8:10:00 AM
OH, I love this; beautifully done, great shape; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/10/2019 6:20:00 PM
Thank you. It was good experience either way.
Date: 1/10/2019 5:09:00 AM
soul and the love lead happily the being to find self entity/// nice poem
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/10/2019 6:20:00 PM
They usually do, right?