hannah’s song

hannah’s song

with cotton clouds above her
and yellow daisies at her feet
she danced to a quiet sonnet
of freedom

hands outstretched 
and palms towards the heavens
her blonde hair flowed 
like summer showers
as she watched waving daisies
swaying, dancing
to the refrain of daybreak

only moments before
morning had nudged us
more gently 
than a marshmallow circle
on her hungry lips

pulling the bed sheets away
smiling on her nakedness
i kissed her shoulders
and brushed my fingers 
through her hair

the moaning sound of music 
caressed the room
much like the linens 
that entangled us
laying ghostly between our bodies
 
two pillows indented 
yet the smudge of lipstick 
and mascara on only one
her sleep deceived me
when she whispered
that she was not going away

cascading memories
from burnt orange mountains
onto sopping marshes soft and slovenly 
like overboiled asparagus
clinging to slippery rocks

words of praise filled her heart 
in her own presence she moved
seductively
a liquefied dancer in the field of daisies
singing
‘you have turned my mourning into dancing
you have shown me the beauty of ashes…’

she stood, 
tears welling in her eyes
in a field of daisies, her blanket of comfort
she whispered,
in the midst of daisies 
i held sunflowers in my heart
with outstretched hands

weeping for joy
she presented pomegranates and strawberries
then with a measured smile
offered an apple

taking a bite
i wondered
where i had read this story before

~ tolbert ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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