Hanging With the Moon

Hanging With The Moon 

Moving to the deep hollow 

rhythm of the double bass 

coupled the with

dance of the piano keys 

and the slow cadence of the guitar strum.

This Master of Jazz carries me away,

off to an old flowing riverboat,

cruising off into the sunset,

taking my restless feet with it,

so I can hang with the Moon,

for a while.



JAZZ
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 6:39 PM
It sways! Lovely write great win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations Marie on your well deserved win in Amy Green's contest "Choose One, Have Fun". Love, Carol
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July 16, 2010 at 3:41 PM
Congrats Marie on your winning poem in Amy's contest with this marvelous creation.. shall we go have our victory dance in the winners circle now? with luv..
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July 16, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Wonderful poem, Marie. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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July 16, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Jazz is my favorite kind of music, and you made me FEEL this poem. LOVE IT! Congrats on your win in my contest.
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June 26, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Cool writings- WOW you write a lot of poetry- I am stopping by and see you have posted so many in a few days
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