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Hang Myself In the Sky Premiere Contest Winner

Hang Myself in the Sky Hang myself in the sky The sun is shining It is frightening The sky is blue There's no clue Looking for secrets You gave me pamphlets No matter what you say I will say “nay” So you’ll say “nigh-nigh” Hang myself in the sky The sun is shining It is exciting But, I am in blue You have no clue Looking for secrets You took me to outlets No matter what you say I will say “pay” So you’ll say “bye-bye” Hang myself in the sky Singing voice is a bit shaky Honestly I don’t want to die You're gonna say “Why?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/5/2017 11:38:00 AM
Well deserved top place Felicia! Congratulations :-)
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 3/5/2017 4:44:00 PM
Thank yo, Mark.
Date: 2/28/2017 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Felicia, well done...
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/28/2017 11:42:00 PM
Thank you, I like your beard.
Date: 2/27/2017 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your grand win, Felicia. The piece shines here like the sun. An undercurrent of secrecy with a defined optimism; I like the repeating lines.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/27/2017 8:53:00 AM
Thank you for your heart warming comment.
Date: 2/27/2017 7:57:00 AM
Well done Felicia, congrats on your win.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/27/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, Phil.
Date: 2/27/2017 12:41:00 AM
You've won the contest with this poem! Congratulations! I'm speechless.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/27/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, I am speechless, too.
Date: 2/23/2017 9:34:00 AM
Instead simply fly up high in the sky.;0)
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/23/2017 2:33:00 PM
You are right :-) Thanks.

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