Hands

lined arthritic hands age spots of autumn's presence.. basil~ garlic scent

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Linda Jackson

Date: 10/26/2013 8:25:00 PM

I like your Haiku. I like the imagery. Best wishes Linda x

Donna Jones

Date: 9/26/2013 6:29:00 PM

You've described my hands too Sara! Loved this.....:-) hard working hands though!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/26/2013 5:36:00 PM

I loved your comment, very funny! This write is exquisitely you, I really loved how you have written this incredible poem! Great Work!! BTW I'm doing better, it's a slow progression to being healed, I had to watch being on the computer too much! But I still am at times! Thanks you for the inquiry!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2013 9:02:00 AM

Spaghetti for lunch..Sara

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/26/2013 9:38:00 AM

Haha Cool haiku, Sara ;)