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Hands

Hands reached out and grabbed my heels as I walked this once bloody field. They were just everyday hands, miners, carpenters, the hands of the butchers boy, the bank clerk, the sordid hands of the local Johnny no good. The tinker, the tailor, the poacher, all pressed for the glory of war, a glory lost in knee deep mud and indiscriminate lead. Where the Devil played poker with fate for the right of souls, the Ferryman busy that day. Before my feet the Poppies fall like men in sights at duties call, then and now the field turned red. I sit the depression where some cannon chewed, now overgrown with moss and memories. Whispers glide by me, idle banter, everyday chat, sport, sisters getting married, mothers worried, will anyone remember me, why. This muddy morass where men walked or ran, never realizing that death had its own pace. And yet every step was made of duty, glory forsaken as a lost cause, every step seen as one closer to home. How many names beneath this soil, how many stories feed these poppies, and how many dreams still lie bleeding. Walk the battlefields and you will feel those hands, the tinker, the tailor, the butcher boy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/13/2010 7:37:00 AM
Stirring revelation!
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Date: 2/25/2010 6:42:00 PM
Miss your wonderful poetry the last two days.. hope all is well and OK ..luv.."Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/25/2010 3:29:00 PM
Quite a tribute to those who lost their lives in war and the memories that can reach up and touch you when you walk the old battlefields, much like the "hands" of "the tinker, the tailor, the butcher boy." "Grass" by Carl Sandburg and "In Flanders Fields" by John McCrae came to mind as I read this. Beautifully written to convey the loss of dreams by young soldiers. Excellent, Daniel! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:48:00 PM
A narrative to ponder over and over again.. elegant words Daniel... appreciate your writes as well as your comments on my blog today.. getting to know each poet on a personal level is kinda fun.. luv.. "Sweetheart" ..thankxxx...
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Date: 2/24/2010 12:35:00 PM
Profound write, Daniel... ..."How many stories feed these poppies, and how many dreams still lie bleeding..... Great write, I feel as though I was standing on the sidelines watching it all!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your Outstanding poetry today Daniel. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 8:27:00 AM
Oh Daniel, it works! I felt the same chills when I read your poem that I felt the year I took my family to a Civil War Battlefield in Virginia. The hair on the back of my neck stood up, then and now...This is very visual and emotional poetry from your empathetic pen. Excellent. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/23/2010 8:27:00 PM
Wow! Powerful poem. Much for the reader to ponder in your words. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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Date: 2/23/2010 8:15:00 PM
You stand out! I will be reading you from now on. Great idea carried so well!
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:15:00 PM
great job, enjoyed reading today, very patriotic work
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Date: 2/23/2010 3:50:00 PM
Great topic on which you have written this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/23/2010 3:15:00 PM
I read James Fraser's poem about war and now i'm reading this poem,and it is heartwrenching..War is Ugly.. very ugly and so its memories..and war is never ending...Charma
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