Hands

Hands reached out and grabbed my heels as
I walked this once bloody field. They were
just everyday hands, miners, carpenters, the
hands of the butchers boy, the bank clerk, 
the sordid hands of the local Johnny no good.
The tinker, the tailor, the poacher, all pressed
for the glory of war, a glory lost in knee deep
mud and indiscriminate lead. Where the Devil
played poker with fate for the right of souls,
the Ferryman busy that day. Before my feet
the Poppies fall like men in sights at duties
call, then and now the field turned red. I sit
the depression where some cannon chewed,
now overgrown with moss and memories.
Whispers glide by me, idle banter, everyday
chat, sport, sisters getting married, mothers
worried, will anyone remember me, why.
This muddy morass where men walked or 
ran, never realizing that death had its own
pace. And yet every step was made of duty,
glory forsaken as a lost cause, every step
seen as one closer to home. How many 
names beneath this soil, how many stories
feed these poppies, and how many dreams
still lie bleeding.

Walk the battlefields and you will feel those
hands, the tinker, the tailor, the butcher boy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Clark Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 7:37 AM
Stirring revelation!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 6:42 PM
Miss your wonderful poetry the last two days.. hope all is well and OK ..luv.."Sweetheart"
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 3:29 PM
Quite a tribute to those who lost their lives in war and the memories that can reach up and touch you when you walk the old battlefields, much like the "hands" of "the tinker, the tailor, the butcher boy." "Grass" by Carl Sandburg and "In Flanders Fields" by John McCrae came to mind as I read this. Beautifully written to convey the loss of dreams by young soldiers. Excellent, Daniel! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 3:48 PM
A narrative to ponder over and over again.. elegant words Daniel... appreciate your writes as well as your comments on my blog today.. getting to know each poet on a personal level is kinda fun.. luv.. "Sweetheart" ..thankxxx...
Haick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 12:35 PM
Profound write, Daniel... ..."How many stories feed these poppies, and how many dreams still lie bleeding..... Great write, I feel as though I was standing on the sidelines watching it all!! Peace, Audrey
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 10:24 AM
I enjoyed reading your Outstanding poetry today Daniel. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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February 24, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Oh Daniel, it works! I felt the same chills when I read your poem that I felt the year I took my family to a Civil War Battlefield in Virginia. The hair on the back of my neck stood up, then and now...This is very visual and emotional poetry from your empathetic pen. Excellent. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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February 23, 2010 at 8:27 PM
Wow! Powerful poem. Much for the reader to ponder in your words. Keep up the good writing! Karen
Byrne Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 8:15 PM
You stand out! I will be reading you from now on. Great idea carried so well!
Culverhouse Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 5:15 PM
great job, enjoyed reading today, very patriotic work
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 3:50 PM
Great topic on which you have written this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 3:15 PM
I read James Fraser's poem about war and now i'm reading this poem,and it is heartwrenching..War is Ugly.. very ugly and so its memories..and war is never ending...Charma
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