Hand Puppets- For Contest

Hand Puppets


Hard, calloused and dirty, it pleaded with me.
It had no eyes, no face, no soul.  Or so I thought,
or didn’t.  Yellowed fingernails, dirt covered and
trembling faced upward as would a beggar’s
face.  A sound, perhaps its voice, startled me.  I
heard nothing but the plea from the open, soiled,
begging hand.  It seemed to say:  “please, sir, please,
I was once like you, one of you.  I worked, as you can
tell by the sinewy strength now buried in despair’s dirt.
I touched – the cheeks of loved ones.  I held – an infant,
a child, my child, and somehow lost my grip on all.
I have felt tears, my own tears, running through clenched
fingers yet not knowing whose tears they were or for whom
they were shed.  I know cold, bone chilling, painful cold
and stiffness borne of pain, yet cannot, or will not,
reach for help and so I beg.  Namelessly, facelessly,
but not shamelessly.  For if I had eyes, I could not look
you in the face, nor could I smile or frown, or say thank you.
I am but a proffered hand in need, not of help but of
sustenance, not of kindness but of indifference, not of
awakening but of oblivion.”

I listened to the hand, looked not upon the face, and placed
a pittance against the enormity of the lifelines torment
and walked away.  I looked at my hands and wondered
what story they told to those who took the time to look
at them, to listen to them.  I covered my face with them,
and I too felt tears running through clenched fingers,
not knowing whose tears they were
or for whom they were shed.


John G. Lawless
2013

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/27/2015 11:41:00 PM
Awesome pen John! Wonderful expressions n great win ! Big congrats! Great imagery!
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:53:00 AM
Wow do you have a great imagination John. I am sure the hand wrote this! (smile) without any help from you. Loved your take on this contest! Congrats!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/26/2015 9:29:00 PM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 7/25/2015 11:20:00 PM
Love this superb poem my friend. Congrats on your win! A7
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John Lawless
Date: 7/26/2015 9:29:00 PM
Thanks for the high marks Robert.
Date: 7/25/2015 10:59:00 PM
JOHN. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 7/26/2015 9:29:00 PM
thanks SKAT
Date: 7/23/2015 7:35:00 PM
One of your best John...and thanks for the comment...Peter
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John Lawless
Date: 7/26/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thank you Peter
Date: 7/23/2015 5:26:00 PM
the metaphor of a beggar as a hand puppet is so original and clever! And the way you ended this I especially enjoyed. The way you end up putting your own hands to your own face and covering it and feeling the tears like the poverty stricken must feel again and again. a powerful and well written free verse. I expect to it high on the list.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/26/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Andrea. In too many cases these people are "invisible" to the passersby going to work. All they see are the "hands" begging.
Date: 7/23/2015 5:23:00 PM
regarding your comment to me on the red boxes of throw away food. I'm hoping the dumpster divers at least can find the food easily with that bright color! such a farce what our nation has become, when law suit happy people make things so difficult for people to want to be humane any more.
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Date: 7/23/2015 4:30:00 PM
Wow, this is excellent and heartbreaking and magnificent in it's substance, all at the same time! A 7 and a fave, for sure!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/26/2015 9:26:00 PM
Thank you Laura for the high praise and high mark. I used to see these "proffered hands" quite frequently when I worked in downtown Boston.
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