Hand Mountain

The mountain is now made up of hands
the meek huddle under the shelter of the moon
an effected lake brings snow too soon
staring across the mountain sands
I trust the ache in my gut to be righteous
sweat begins to condensate on my brow
rumours abound in my self conscience 
i know everything, but nothing now
the mountain lady pursues me for my skill
i tread across the beaten path of hands
like the harsh shriek of the electric trill
i have overloaded my sweat glands
"the task is upon you, young man" 
the mountain lady said as I ran.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bocsa Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 9:33 AM
I liked Hand mountain with its multitudes of symbols and inner notes echoing mountains of troubles you may move with a rhyming verse.Best regards,O.B
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November 21, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Perseverance over adversity...we all have those mountains to climb...loved reading your sonnet this morning, Ingvar! Have a beautiful weekend...hugs, Rhonda
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