Hamster Wheel

one thing missed
then two fall down
not a baby
left to drown
just simple things
oft forgotten
bananas left
black and rotten
bunnies made of
hair and dust
conspiracies of
dirt and rust
gather, gather
piling high
they just get worse
as days go by
spend a day with
broom and mop
working 'til you
think you'll drop
what is clean
won't stay that way
never even merely
for a day
webs of cob hang
from the ceiling
mocking me
(you know the feeling)
endless, endless
is the filth
defeating me and
harming health
inadequate is
how I feel
can't keep up on
this endless wheel
where has all my
life-force gone?
no more strength
to sing this song
dust and dirt has 
me defeated
I guess I'll just...
remain seated.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
June 13, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Danielle I know exactly how you feel - Due to health issues I can do in a day what I once did in an hour - some days I feel so defeated - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Winter Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 4:46 PM
I think I related to this a little too well. Congrats Danielle on a most excellent featured write. Love, Shar
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June 9, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poem being featured>James
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June 9, 2009 at 8:25 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week. Keep your pen sailing in the ocean of ideals and ideas. You are a such a awesome poet
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June 8, 2009 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations Danielle on "Hamster Wheel" being featured. Vince
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June 8, 2009 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Danielle. Love, Carol
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June 8, 2009 at 12:18 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Danielle Rgds Brian
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