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Hammock

Hemp woven like cradle Hanging on summer trees; Haven of net drifts, as Hands clutch iced lemonade … Heat tans our skin, while breeze Hums evening’s melody Hushing thoughts, we unwind. 2/21/2017 Pleiades H Contest for Kim Merryman Checked via howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 3/2/2017 4:48:00 PM
geez if I slung a hammock to relax would be bombarded by seagulls lol....Loved it Nette.....Seren
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Date: 2/24/2017 10:26:00 PM
Such a relaxing scene created in your imagery, Nette...it sounds heavenly! Congrats on a great win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:03:00 PM
I can picture it all! Lovelt, Nette! Congrats!
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations Nette, sounds so great...
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Date: 2/24/2017 2:47:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations. It is raining here full blast. Hammock is inside now. Bed, book and inspiration, Kai
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Date: 2/23/2017 11:29:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/23/2017 8:36:00 PM
A lovely piece! Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 2/23/2017 7:32:00 PM
I LOVE this one, Nette. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 2/23/2017 5:19:00 PM
Nette, An excellent Pleiades, with smooth flowing lines. Such a restful picture you have painted! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 2/23/2017 5:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:24:00 PM
Sounds a great way to unwind, Nette:) looks like a winner :)
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Date: 2/21/2017 5:59:00 AM
Excellent. love the visual. it's sounds wonderful , if it was England at the moment, It would be whoolies, and hot tea. Brrr it's cold. take care. Pete.
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Date: 2/20/2017 8:54:00 PM
A hammock hanging haven...a beautiful sunset and sunrise nette...very well crafted P H...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/20/2017 6:11:00 PM
You paint a beautiful picture of a lazy summer time with your hammock pleiades. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/20/2017 5:42:00 PM
the life my friend, the life..loved the picture..felt the picture..live the picture..good luck
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Date: 2/20/2017 2:58:00 PM
A beautiful way to unwind...
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Date: 2/20/2017 2:18:00 PM
Scoot over:)
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Date: 2/20/2017 1:49:00 PM
I'm taking a leave to get there and bring margarita. You got me hooked with this breathtaking poem!
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Date: 2/20/2017 1:26:00 PM
I'm jealous this is wonderful great flow good words and wonderful imaginary ... a winner already Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/20/2017 1:15:00 PM
- .... a lovely and peaceful rest in your hammock, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2017 12:49:00 PM
oh Nette I LOVE the description here I wish it was me in the hammock but I'd probably fall out of it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2017 1:16:00 PM
...me too :))))

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