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Gunga Din can have his gin… Old King Tut his beer, but I’ll rely on the sparkling wine. Just a bit before dinner, imbibe… just enough to create a sigh… a cabernet sip for the heart… My purple-tinted glass is high; I fill it nowhere near the brim - halfway between a half and quarter to five. I can do without a glass, but what kind of class to drink straight from the bottle… Dear Dad, on my wedding day, did just that thing…do you think he brought his game, when he guzzled half the bottle as the champagne flowed like the Trevi Fountain. My spouse stole my papa’s heart…not good enough for his daughter…too soon. So we drink to forget or we forget to drink. We’ve all become forgetful, forgiving the unforgivable, having relationships with frenemies. Do I sound like I’ve been drinking. I’m not…just poetically speaking I’m drunk with words, with laughter, with memories, with excitement, with friends (that last, even through this supercalifragilisticexpialidocious* sup) 5/25/2025 *name of song in original Mary Poppins movie

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Date: 5/26/2023 1:50:00 AM
I am so happy to know you have been married over 43 years ago. May many more are enjoyed. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2023 2:40:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/25/2023 8:13:00 PM
Bottems up ! Also love Andreas joke.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2023 2:41:00 AM
It was cute!
Date: 5/25/2023 12:38:00 PM
I have a joke for you on the long word. You tell someone, "I can say supercalifragilisticexpialidocious* backwards" Then you turn your back to them and just say the word. haha
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2023 2:27:00 PM
LOL…love it and you hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/25/2023 12:37:00 PM
i really like the flow of this and how it starts out with the wine metaphor, etc. I am getting the idea your father actually thought you didn't measure up to the groom? Did I get that right? Wow.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2023 2:27:00 PM
He hadn’t met him before the wedding weekend. We met on Valentine’s Day and married on April 19th. He was mad at me. Still they packed up their motor home with my mom’s BFF wedding cake. For a gift - a sign that my husband remembers saying “There’s no place like home.” I don’t think they thought we would last. Oh well…43 years later.

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