Hallucination

The soul travels like a spinning speed train,
‘to and fro’ it moves like a pendulum bob,
‘Tick!,tick!!,tick!!!’ says the dangling watch
For time waits and respects no one,I mean no one!.

The hills speak to me in inverted form,
I try to touch them but my hands fiddle
the apexes ;Am I upside down or dreaming?
Then one of them stares at me like a dragon.

I  shake and shake my head a million times,
To find myself standing face to face a mirror,
Reflection!,deflection!!,flash-backs of many years,
Spin inside my head as I swim into oblivion…

I look sternly at the strong light tearing me
apart ;the Sun  is here and its staring at me,
Men in whites surround me with wry smiles,
Where am I? on earth!,In the hospital..doing what?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/30/2015 12:56:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem olusegun! See our whole life being spent in hospital,, but thank God not as a patient!
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:08:00 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:22:00 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held This Year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very old contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "EXCUSE ME" if you'd like or have the time. --I'm glad to be back on the wild side of Poetry Soup hosting, new contest. Yours Truly!!! *LINDA*
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Date: 10/5/2014 4:27:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Aro hope to see more of you in my next contest. Light & Love
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Date: 10/4/2014 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Olusegun. Nice imaginary.
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Date: 10/4/2014 10:19:00 AM
You kept the mystery until I was awakened in the hospital......wow! This was so good! I had no idea where this one was taking us..... Congratulations to you on a wonderful poem!
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Date: 10/4/2014 9:51:00 AM
Interesting write on hallucination, Congrats on the win, Olusegun
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Date: 9/9/2014 3:53:00 PM
Aro my friend, you only need mark 3 different devises - at the bottom of your verse put [simile* - a metaphor using like or as]line 1[onomatopoeia** - the formation of a word from a sound associated with what is named]line 3[personification - the attribution of a personal nature or human characteristics to something nonhuman, or the representation of an abstract quality in human form] line 5 -----then you can take away all the rest of the asterisks :) Light & Love
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Date: 9/8/2014 7:04:00 AM
Reads like a winner..I think that a person would be confused as to what is happening when the spirit leaves the body for its eternal destiny..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara
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