Halloween Tragedy

HALLOWEEN TRAGEDY
There was a young lad, Joe Keating Disappeared whilst trick or treating The poor lad took flight One Halloween night Due to severe overeating. As he made his way through the streets Each house that he called on had treats He should have said no Or taken it slow But he had a weakness for sweets He stuffed all they gave him and soon, Puffed up like a gas-filled balloon, He floated on high, Right up to the sky And now he’s the man in the moon. 9th October 2020 Halloween Limerick Contest Sponsor - Tania Kitchin
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Koplin Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 5:53 AM
Nice set, Congrats on your win!!
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 4:16 PM
what a fun string of limericks, many congrats on your win Bryn:-) hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Very, very cute Bryn! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Watson Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Visions of a Billy Bunter lookalike come to mind,Bryn. Funny and competently ambitious with three verses of fun and great flow.
Kitchin Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Bryn, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun and creative limericks, great syllable counts!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 4:42 AM
Interesting and inspired... Love the visions from you muse. God bless you
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